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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person acmarache
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So hot. I love it when you write smut. I love Shunsui and Ukitake together. They're so hilarious.
person Irana
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROTHFMAO!!! Yay!!!! I was wondering how long Ichigo and Renji both would be able to hold their tempers. Ichigo especially because of the three currently sharing his body. Somehow I'm not surprised Ishida managed to not be a part of the 'chat' with Kurotshuchi. Nor am I surprised by his response to being their 'alibi'. And I simply love, love, love the reiatsu thing. It made me smile like a big goofy dork.

I've got to say, I'm really pleased with the way you're handling this. You've got so many relationships to develop, plot to keep flawless and humor to inject and I really do think you're doing a beautiful job. Trust me, I know how difficult building a story like this can be and how frustrating it can get. *hugs you*
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story!
person acmarache
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You mean you aren't supposed to abusively throw throw pillows? Oops. I'm so glad Renji helped Ichigo get that bastard Kurosutchi back.
person Erin
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bless, I loved this chapter! The fact that there is a little merging between Ichigo and Kisuke has to be some kind of good sign surely?
Also, beat up the captain of th 12th all you like, I am sure everyone would give you an alibi for that^_^
Thanks for writing!
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just want to hold Ichigo so badly. I can't imagine how painful this is for him. I hope he catches a break soon. One hundred chapters you say? You're no even at the halfway mark yet and I'm getting all antsy for potential pairs (and surprisingly, more Gin)
person Erin
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an intresting chapter, giving us back views. I had never considered the hieracrchy propely in the Espada before...Aizen really is a bastard isn't he?
Don't blame you for having Gin say he is nice, I don't think he is totally evil under it all either, for some reason.
Thanks for writing, I look forward tp the next chapter ^_^
person Irana
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* I love seeing the vulnerabilities of the characters... it makes them so much more relateable. You my dear, have made me a happy woman with this chapter. Well, the entire fic really, but this chapter was full of the WAFF and I needed that today.
person acmarache
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such screen hogs. Though, I believe it was quite worth it. Leave to Byakuya to be the only one who could talk some sense into Ulquiorra without taking weeks to do it. They're so cute together. I love how they don't have a problem pulling the sticks out of their arses when they're alone. Considering how much effort you've put into this baby, I'd say you're allowed to have footnotes. However, while your notes at the bottom are helpful, the links don't work.
person AJS
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very - cute, is the best I can put it.

BTW - ever considered giving us some Shirosaki/Benehime/Zangetsu action? It'd be - interesting.