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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh where do they go from here (sniffles) poor ichigo, poor kisuke. loved chapter 30, 31 tore at my heart, both chaps were written really well. I wonder how ichigo is going to manage having kisuke so close and yet unable to be with him. (sigh) keep up the good work and try not to leave us in suspense for too long.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do believe I sense the beginnings of something.....
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you made it sound as if I were against Ichigo/Kisuke/Grimmjow! XD But whatever. Well, the one threesome you hinted at was obviously Shirosaki/Benihime/Zangetsu, but I wonder who else you're planning to pair up. From what I've read I'd guess at an Byakuya/Ulquoirra pairing, but they both seem too stiff to let anyone else into the mix. Renji and Uryuu's relationship is was too established to let anyone else into the mix and right now, I can't think of anyone who'd fit in anyway. Who's left then? Hmmmm... Jyuushiro/Shunsui/Yoruichi? Well, it seems like I will have to keep guessing. Give me a hint? *grin* Well, on to the chapter itself:
You know, the whole time I read this I didn't stop chuckling once. I really, really like this unexpected twist you put on Ulquoirra and Byakuya, I never would have thought those two would get along so well. But all the little mentions of Ichigo tending to Urahara made me itch for the next chapter, I soooo want to know what happens with them! When Urahara takes over he'd obviously remember Ichigo, but young Kisuke would have no idea or at least would be completely freaked out by his sudden attraction to Kurosaki, so I can't see that situation straightening itself out without a conflict. And Ichigo's still drugged... *sense of foreboding* But, hmm.. he managed to leave Kisuke's reincarnation alone for all these years, makes me wonder whether he will continue to hold back and to try and avoid inadvertently forcing the young Kisuke into anything.
And I wish Gin would manage to break free from whatever's keeping him at Aizen's side. The last chapter made me kinda like him and noone deserves to be under Aizen-bastards control.
You know, the whole time I read this I didn't stop chuckling once. I really, really like this unexpected twist you put on Ulquoirra and Byakuya, I never would have thought those two would get along so well. But all the little mentions of Ichigo tending to Urahara made me itch for the next chapter, I soooo want to know what happens with them! When Urahara takes over he'd obviously remember Ichigo, but young Kisuke would have no idea or at least would be completely freaked out by his sudden attraction to Kurosaki, so I can't see that situation straightening itself out without a conflict. And Ichigo's still drugged... *sense of foreboding* But, hmm.. he managed to leave Kisuke's reincarnation alone for all these years, makes me wonder whether he will continue to hold back and to try and avoid inadvertently forcing the young Kisuke into anything.
And I wish Gin would manage to break free from whatever's keeping him at Aizen's side. The last chapter made me kinda like him and noone deserves to be under Aizen-bastards control.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well... byakuya switched from izuru to the ex-espada REALLY fast... is he EASY?!?!?! jk... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh? Is this a byakuya/ulquiorra pairing I sense? They're actually well suited for each other when you think about it though...
Anyway, I hope the next chapter is about how the young Kisuke responds to being with Ichigo XD I can't wait!
Anyway, I hope the next chapter is about how the young Kisuke responds to being with Ichigo XD I can't wait!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but deliciously exciting. Gah, and although it's great and I like Gin's point of view - I wish he were able to give up on Aizen - I sooo want to go back to Kisuke's point of view. Or Ichigo's. Or maybe even Byakuya and Ulquiorra's, 'cause that would be very interesting, too. *grin* Anyway, from what I've seen so far it seems like Aizen is losing - I hope that proves true! It would suck if they were to drive the Espada back only to find out that they took Kisuke with them. >__< But Ichigo wouldn't let that happen, right? Right. He'd sooner rip a hole in reality himself and follow them into Hueco Mundo.
Oh, I also really liked that Grimmjow jumped in to defend Kisuke! The older Urahara would probably hate it, but the young Kisuke seems like he would be thankful. I really like the sorta-friends-caretaker relationship you had those two develop. (But only as long as this stays an Ichigo/Kisuke! XD Don't want Grimmjow to get mixed up in that, although... wait. Forget what I just said. That would be extremely hot! XD)
Well, I can't wait for an update! You're doing a fantastic job with this story. ^__^
Shiruy
Oh, I also really liked that Grimmjow jumped in to defend Kisuke! The older Urahara would probably hate it, but the young Kisuke seems like he would be thankful. I really like the sorta-friends-caretaker relationship you had those two develop. (But only as long as this stays an Ichigo/Kisuke! XD Don't want Grimmjow to get mixed up in that, although... wait. Forget what I just said. That would be extremely hot! XD)
Well, I can't wait for an update! You're doing a fantastic job with this story. ^__^
Shiruy
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like these different point of view chapters. Especially with Gin. He's supposed to be a bad guy...but I...like him.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
have they captured gin??? poor gin... poor kisuke... poor ichigo... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowowowowowowowowow! Go Ichi! I'm so excited right now!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God!! O___O *scream* You really have a thing for cliffhangers, don't you? *dies a little inside* XD To stop at such a suspenseful moment... argh! I really hope you'll update again soon, and I hope even more that the next chapter will be from Kisuke's or Ichigo's point of view. 'Cause if it's not, then... then!! Then I'll be forced to deal with it and wait even longer for what I really want to read, I guess. xD