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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh!!! ichigo has got kisuke!!! what now???
ASOTA
person meshala101
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! how could you end it there, that was beyond cruel. Ichigo finally makes an appearance,he finally reaches his beloved kisuke, the two former lovers embrace (well one falls into a state of unconsciousness but it was still sweet all the same) and then ?. (My point exactly) You are such a horrible person, a gifted writer, but a horrible person. I still loved the chapter, despite the horrible ending. I can't wait for ch 28, I bet it's going to be good ;)
person verily
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter.
person Afrieal
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy hannah Affie just called me in tears (she loved the update so much) and I just read this It is one of the best of your chapters so far... She asked me to review for both of us because of her 'kaa-san's compter has dial up and times out regularly (sigh) thanks for the continuing story keep up the great work

Ryshand and Afrieal
person Shiruy
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I know you're already updating at a very fast pace, but PLEASE give us the next chapter soon! Like, yesterday! *___* The tension's killing me, and Urahara shoved Mizuno to the side again and I think I almost like Mizuno better because he's more innocent. Grimjaw is surprisingly adorable in how he cares for Kisuke and I'm dying to see the moment Ichigo and Kisuke meet again! *___* Because that IS Ichigo's reiatsu Kisuke's feeling, right? Damn, I so hope that Ichigo's going to kick Aizen-baka's ass >__< Oh, and the last chapter was breath-taking in its desperate sadness. I felt so sorry for Ichigo... *shudder* It must have been horrible for him.
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh oh! i smell trouble!
ASOTA
person amcarche
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This completely made my morning. Now I can go to my classes, sit in my own little world, and everything will be great today!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let go on to just say, I love your story. BUT! You left off at a cliffy! Why oh why did you do that. I'm sitting here like...'sweet beans, Ichigo will get Kisuke get back'...and BAM Cliffy! Seriously when is the next chapter going to be up because you got me captivated.
person meshala101
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it a new chapter already, I'm in heaven. (lol) loved the chapter, great cliffy you just don't know what will happen next. Will Ichigo turn up in time for the battle and if he does will the old kisuke be there to greet him. Oh the possibilites, please hurry I have to know what happens next.
person amcarche
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Hot. So sad for Ichigo in the end. I do believe that I love Yuzu even more now.