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Oh, Kaaaaat. I have a challenge for you. Isshin and Ryuuken one drunken night in Ryuuken's youth. Add Kisuke or Yoruichi with a video camera.
And I swear by all that is dark and unholy (Ryuuken) I'm sending both Quincy to find you if you don't post on this soon.

Omedetou! You have managed to keep me entranced and (relatively) sane for about a week now. I'm a lazy one-shotter... I didn't read it 24/7 but I came close to it. My computer is officially irritated with having to see the same page everyday ;) Well, I have to admit that you have corrupted me... (not easy.. i earned the nickname "Jade" early for a reason) Before, I found Urahara/Ichigo to be kind of squicky.. like old man and a kid squicky. you have managed to convert me much to the cheering of at least one of my friends. I've snikered and laughed so much during this story so far that my mother thought i'd lost my mind. What I wouldn't give to get your twisted muse into an RP with mine *evil* I ramble too often *cough*... the story is interesting. I think my biggest 'complaint' or issue with it is Grimmjow being kind of a sad puppy kind of push over. BUT.. I do know it's easy for readers to miss all the layers of characterization an author puts into a character. Though, I have to confess that I have skipped most of the Kyoraku/Jyuushiro smut...
*jyuushiro rubs back of his head* "aah, sorry, she seems afraid to break me..."
*Jade rolls eyes* Go back to bed, you damned albino....

leave a note in your next author's comments if you'd like to chat on GoogleTalk or something.. I don't use this email much anymore (too much spam).

Saa... Keep it up, luv! If nothing else I can help ya beta if you're in a pinch.

--Jade

So - I just wanted to say that I love this story and it's awesome to see you posting again. I've been meaning to do some bleach fanart inspired by some of your writing, and I'll let you know once I get around to it. You know, with links and things. I'm on Y!gallery under the name "VanityLeague" by the way.

Anyway. Yeah. Love your work. Thanks for sharing. :)

So Aizen is not still bedding Gin? I had thought that Aizen was forcing him to do more than just serve under him and was actually making Gin service him. I hope Hisagi informs Kira and Rangiku about Gin's motives. I hope Gin hides that flower before Aizen sees it. I can imagine the punishment/torture Gin would have to endure. Please update soon!! And more Gin please!

Finally you update again! Wait what's this? No ichigo? When are you going to get to ichigo and urahara? I've been waiting like two years for a new ichigo urahara chapter and you still haven't given it to me. There wasn't even a hint of the innuendo that most of your chapters contain. Oh well at least you've updated again. But it was so short. That had better mean youve got something very good in the next, hopefully much longer chapter. Upload it soon please.

Finally you update again! Wait what's this? No ichigo? When are you going to get to ichigo and urahara? I've been waiting like two years for a new ichigo urahara chapter and you still haven't given it to me. There wasn't even a hint of the innuendo that most of your chapters contain. Oh well at least you've updated again. But it was so short. That had better mean youve got something very good in the next, hopefully much longer chapter. Upload it soon please.By the way the quote is from the usual suspects

I can honestly say that this is the only piece of fanfiction that I can read and don't feel disgust for Gin. And you're doing it while keeping his outward personality the same! Chpater 93 is a perfect example of that. He knows that he did wrong and there isn't a damn thing that he can do to stop it.

Lovely work. Thanks for writing for us!

Great chapter. Gin is tugging at my heart, so many conflicting emotions. Bu that's a good thing since it means you've written him really well! ^^ Really enjoying this story!
Keep going!!

I almost missed a day at work reading this...

That being said, I wanted to complement you on how you are dealing with the Shun/Juu/Grimm threesome. I just read chapter 71 with it's 'gentling' of Grimm and how the two captains are having to deal with Grimm's past even though they dont really 100% know about it. It's wonderful.

I'm enjoying the pairings, the angst, the love and the emotion that you're writing for us. Thanks!

Chapter 89 made me seriously want to do a happy dance. My favorite kitty and his two new pets....Kisuke showing just how much of a sneaky badass he can be.... loves it!