rate_review Reviews

Love the story so far. I just noticed a slight error. Kyouraku-taichou, the guy with the pink haori over his taichou's robes, naturally has two separate blades, resemblance of the daishou (katana and wakizaki) that samurai wore. So Kurosaki-taichou isn't the only one carrying two swords.

That was for me? Oh...*blushes* that makes me so incredibly happy! I'm glad i was able to give you a bit of a giggle. I adored this chapter. Ichigo has grown so much. I love how you showed just how in love he is with Kisuke.
"That boy is Urahara Kisuke," he whispered, knowing his voice shook with emotions as he said the words but unable to help himself. Urahara had returned and all he could do was pray that the other man would return to him as well.

This was for me? Oh, my.....*blushes and giggles insanely* That makes me so happy! I'm glad I could make you giggle and smile! I'm doing my job right! Yay me! I absolutely adored this chapter! Ichigo has grown so much. I loved how you showed just how strong his love for Kisuke is.

"That boy is Urahara Kisuke," he whispered, knowing his voice shook with emotions as he said the words but unable to help himself. Urahara had returned and all he could do was pray that the other man would return to him as well.

I loved the entire chapter, but this is not only my favorite part, but quite possibly the best ending paragraph I've ever read for a chapter. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Gah1 Each time I try to think of a pairing I'd like to see, it's like you read my mind! I love Hitsugaya/Karin! They're so cute!

Me like-e!

I like this a lot! Awesome way to start Monday morning. Now to get to work...ugh. Thanks for sharing!

Woooohoooo! Another chapter! Yay! It was awsome, love. I find the part about Karin and Hitsugaya dating especially amusing. Kukuku...Poor Toushiro...Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update. It was nice seeing how Ichigo was doing and I'm anxious to read more! Kisses!

Ohmigod what freaky thing are you doing to Urahara with his spirit thread being pink. I actually thought you would bring them together when Urahara was older which I love, but I guess this is okay. And Ichigo's captain does that mean he is dead then, if not then he must be like old, well not old old but you get the point. Anyway looking forward to the next installment.

I like seeing Renji and Ishida in the future. They're my favorite couple and I want to see them last.

Good job... I see many good things that will come out of this fanfic. I like the way you haven't shoved character histories down our throats. When futuristic fanfics do that it takes away some of the quality and I sometimes forget what happened in the between time. It's nice to know that you aren't doing that here. And the race between Renji and Ishida is hilarious. I want to see where you go with the whole spirit thread thing, it looks really interesting.

Also, I greatly appreciate how you are portraying Kisuke. Even, though we don't know much about his past or his younger personality, you seemed to have captured what he used to be like, as well as changing him slightly to match his new one. It still keeps him very much in charater, which in many fics doesn't happen that often.

Finally, I thought you would like to know, that this is one fic that I plan on recommending to my friends, because all of us know how to appreciate a well written fanfic when we see it.

Well, Keep those updates coming.
Sincerely,
Lison

Hi, love! I just wanted to let you know that you have one heck of an awsome story going for you there. I can't wait to see more of it. I'm really curious about where you're going with this and hope Ichigo and Kisuke get to meet soon. Kisses for now, hon!