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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person ferlerrr
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated. I'm glad Uryuu appreciate Renji's love and chose him over - well, over everything. I like them together. I imagine how devastated Renji could be if Kira went to Uryuu to speak... Ah, poor guy, I hope he will find some love and goal in his life and be happy. He is a good guy with the worst decisions... Ah, the chapter ws so melancholic, but I see the light - as well as Uryuu. *sighs*Yes, his father betrayed him on so many ways, but he has Renji and he loves him so much...
If I meet your muse, I will catch her, bind her and send her to you in that instant, and make sure she arrives safely. *smiles*
Thank you for the chapter.
person Fluco
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love you story. I love the relationships. Especially Ishida/Renji. But all of they except Ryuken and Rukia personally I think both of them are selfish idiots even in the canon. I am so looking foward to your next update. Please update soon. I will be checking daily you have me hooked. Wonderful story
person savvy
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i just finished ch. 50 and thought that i really should review this delightful story. i would have in the past....but i kept getting distracted by the 'Next Chapter' button. it was a tad to tempting.
First of all, i love how you wrote Grimmjow. he is one of my favorite characters and this new take on him was very refreshing. i especially the love the mama cat analogy Shunsui used a few chapters back.
Second of all, i can't wait to hear more about Ryuuken and Rukia. those two will be interesting.
third, i must ask....WHERE'S CHAD?????? i might have missed news of him in the earlier chapters in my haste to read them....but i don't think i've heard of him so far. he's too cool. it would suck if he drifted away like Orihime.
Fourth....your description of an earlier Urahara was quite...I'm not sure if delectable or despicable fit more. he's scary. but awesome.
As for Gin...now i sympathize with him. i am really hoping for a happy ending for him. Hisagi too. i also hope Mayuri rots. never, ever liked him. hope his daughter gets a happy ending though.
Will Hanatarou be getting a gf/bf anytime soon? and what about tessai? they need lovin' too.
ok, i should probably stop....and maybe finish reading to ch. 89 before ask anymore questions.....because i am full of them.
so keep posting these chapters!!! they're hilarious....and the smut scenes can be quite....hot.
;)


person onlydani
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is FANTASTIC!!! I started reading it about a week ago thinking I would read maybe 2 or 3 chapters every few days but after like 2 days I could barely stop. its SO GOOD! I am an avid fan of the Uryuu/Renji pairing and I am so glad you gave them so much story time *hugs your muse*.

I never really put much thought into ulquiorra/Byakuya but I have to say good job on that pairing, they definitely would be hot together. I cant wait for the next update!

schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could I get you to send an update email to Cheetahfang666@gmail.com ?
person astrakage
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I've never read anything like it and I can't wait for more. Your writing style drew me in and wouldn't let me go. You paint vivid pictures before me and I love it.

Would you please send me an email at astrakage@yahoo.com when you update? I want to read the rest as soon as it is up.
person Nana
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello dear katami-san
I can't even begin to describe how glad I am that you're writing again :)
I truly love your writing style and the depth of your characters (and the smut, of course ;))
So I just wanted to say, thank you and keep up the good work!

P.S. I linked your story to a friend of mine, and she got soooo hooked :D Hehe :D
person Valmasy
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Fates, this story is... breathtaking. I can't wait to see where it whips us to next. Thanks for staying true to the characters. It makes it that much easier to read and damn... You're just brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter~!
person ferlerrr
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. Thank you for it.
person Tragicom
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, you write a really addictive story. I was sitting here at 8:30 thinking "I'll get to chapter ten and go to bed." At this point in time it is 3:45 and I have read up to chapter eighty-nine.