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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She's been meaning to read this for a while, but never got around to it. Now she has, and she is glad that she did.
It's an original concept. It's interesting how your theatre seems to be the climax of a psychological crescendo. She loved the imagery in the last chapter, especially the Red Nurse - the introduction to her was probably her favourite scene.
Your style is rather gorily poetic, and rather refreshing amongst the generic pile of almost well written, smut driven stories that seem to be AFF's staple.
However, it seems to be every which way. You're never quite sure what is happening, what has happened or what seems to be going to happen, which can be a little puzzling, but it does add to the feel of the fiction. Simple things like italics can help a little, without changing the original ideal.
Anyway, she can't wait for the update.
It's an original concept. It's interesting how your theatre seems to be the climax of a psychological crescendo. She loved the imagery in the last chapter, especially the Red Nurse - the introduction to her was probably her favourite scene.
Your style is rather gorily poetic, and rather refreshing amongst the generic pile of almost well written, smut driven stories that seem to be AFF's staple.
However, it seems to be every which way. You're never quite sure what is happening, what has happened or what seems to be going to happen, which can be a little puzzling, but it does add to the feel of the fiction. Simple things like italics can help a little, without changing the original ideal.
Anyway, she can't wait for the update.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, that was weird
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*handsoverspecialticket* - go Ichi^^ I love that pairing!!! *bookmarks* Keep it up! LG Noony
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOH! I am so intrigued! Waiting for for! Love your style of writing.