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by MarinLiliz

person KoF
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"My Crooked Valentine" was very cute. Mpreg like I said not my cup of tea, but it was a cute end to a collection of good stories. Thanks for the shoutout, I look forward to your next work.
person Yakumo
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I think every chapter gets better, in my opinion. My favorite one so far is the one with Ukitake, Shunsui, and the bowl of cream. I wonder how they ended up using it.. ~_^ Keep up the good work.
person Anise
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your very welcome for the reviews, your series are just a lot of fun so that makes it easy to say nice things about your writing ^_^
It's too bad this had to come to an end but it was really wonderful and I loved reading it, I'm definitely going to watch out for more of your stuff in the future! :)
person KoF
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I felt bad for Kira but it was written well, enjoyed the Arrancar loving, the Mpreg was ok but not really my cup of tea, enjoyed Ukitake's letter, yum strawberries, I like how you wrote Byakuya and Renji, love how Gin is written reminds me of an evil genius's cat, lol Yachiru ate part of the candy and Renji might have competition, bad Gin leave Kira alone, and I enjoyed how you wrote Ikkaku and Yumichika.
Sorry I felt I should say something about every chapter lol. I look forward to reading the IchixIshi one..
person Anise
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that you brought back Zaraki he does seem to want to put himself right in the middle of things doesn't he :) And poor Kira writers do love to torture him, usually with Gin who definitely comes across as suitably creepy in this.
I hope you don't take this as too nitpicky but in ch.7 you wrote 'dou you want...' instead of 'do', just thought you ought to know and I look forward to more as always ^_^
person Anise
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to feel slightly stalkerish considering I reviewed your christmas series and now I'm reading your Valentine series but these have been just as much fun as your last ones, although I have to admit that the Ryuuken/Isshin one nearly broke my brain (mpreg, eep!) I am definitely going to be looking forward to reading the rest of these! :)