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AWESOME!! you rock.. sorry it took me so long to comment >.> anyway it was a lot of fun helping and the end product was better still!

this is the first bleach fic i have read and i really like it. i can't wait to read more of your story. Happy Writing!!!!

Please tell me Byakuya is going to get a tast of his own medicen later? Either through some other party, or from Ichigo? Though it would also be really satisfying if Byakuaya fell in love with Ichigo after all that, and A) Ichigo is badly hurt making him realise it, or B) Ichigo finds out about his plan and leaves him heartbroken, and trying to win him back. Oooo I'd so love that, I love tormenting basterds. ^^ Very good so far, I can't wait for more.

I really like this. Congrats, you got them IC!! Especially Bya. Ichi could be more defensive, but its hard to really write about him being in love i think, so I think you did a good job. You shift tenses a little bit, not all the time, but for example whe you write: He met Byakuya’s eyes and shakes his head hard, speechless. You used :met: with :shakes:, so it would sound better if you chose either past or present. You do that a little bit again with Bya thoughts and comments that he makes to himself, but i'm not sure if that was just the style of your writing there. Anyways, I really enjoyed this!!! Keep going!!

I find myself really enjoying this. Byakuya has Ichigo stretched taut and keeps tightening and tightening, it really makes me want to know what's going to happen later. Ichigo is still very much himself, even when almost giving in to the nervousness and fear he has about love. Byakuya's inner thoughts are just so laughably mean XD So gimme more! ...You know, please.

more?

This is so hawt

I'm really liking this. I especially like the way Byakuya is portrayed; he's very much in character. Please update soon! ^_^

Wow! The wait was well worth it. I'm still feeling bad for Ichigo though. I do hope there is a change of heart on Byakuya's end.

Ah, just discovered your fic. It's really nice, I like the way you're wording each phrase, and also the fact that you're paying a lot of attention to the plot. I hope you update soon, I can hardly wait for the next act!

it was a good chapter. I think you're doing a good job with ichigo, remembering that while he's attracted to Byakuya he's also a teenager with limted or no experience and that Byakuya at his age has tons of it, not to mention that ichigo never have been in this kind of relationship but feel vulnerabel and unsure of himself and byakuya questioning his own appeal and wondering what Byakuya sees in him so its good that your taking things between them nice and slow, Just don't go too slow lol And please update as soon as possible.