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Oh you have no idea how happy i was to see this story updated, then sad that it was the last chapter *sniff sniff*
You had me giggling shame on you, i loved the ending... Shuuhei mommy yum.
And now i will resort to begging, again, lol.
Please please please give pretty smut add-on...
wow this has to be the longest review i have ever given.

This was really wonderful I never thought I would actually like a pairing like this but I really enjoyed reading it. I think it was the way that you wrote both of them that made it so fun to read, Hisaga's reaction after kissing Zaraki was priceless, you'd have thought it was him that had just gotten kissed out of the blue :)
This was a lot of fun and I'm definitely going to keep an eye out on the chance that you write a follow-up because smutty add-ons are always the best! ^_^

OMFG I can hear it now. XD "Mommy! Mommy! XD" rofl Yumichika is never going to leave them alone, now. X3 And that's saying something. lol XD

I'd like a mutty add-on, please! =D PleasePleasePlease puh-leeeeeze??? *puppy eyes*

Dammit! That's supposed to be "smutty" add-on up there. >( Sorry, Draco-san. XP

Wow, what a wonderful thing to come home to after a difficult day at work. I was so happy to see that this story had been updated, and what a great chapter. It had me laughing nearly all the way through. Hisagi's viewpoint of this entire situation is just so hilarious, and the complete mental collapse he had after that kiss practically had me rolling. The scene with Ayasegawa was pure gold as well, and Zaraki's annoyance was just so... Zaraki. Thank you, I needed this.

You did a great job with this story. I love it to bits. And I'm glad my other review made you happy, and you're quite welcome, you deserved every bit of praise. :)
(and I wouldn't say no to the add-on ^^ if you find it in you)

Smutty add-on! For the love of god, SMUTTY ADD-ON!!!! XD

OMG PLEASE DO A SMUTTY ADD-ON! xD I want MOAR Kenpachi/Shuuhei. xD Good job on this story by the way.

I loved the last bit. Good finish. Heh. I could imagine Shuuhei's panicking about the kiss so easily. So amusing. Yay! Finally the last one!...and you know, smut involving these two will always be welcome. -grin-

Please update soon!!

Now that that's out of the way...I love your characterization in this. Everyone seems so perfect. Your portrayal of Kenpachi is one of the best I've read, and your Shuuhei is incredible. You've taken two characters who are rather passed over in both the manga and anime and really fleshed them out.

Okay, here I was, planning to sift through the bleach section after a considerable absence, just to see if anything worthwhile had appeared when I saw this story. I stopped and thought, 'that's a strange pairing...', and I have to admit I was rather skeptical, but decided to check it out anyways, and I didn't regret it.

This is a wonderful piece of writing! Your way of writing those two is really exceptional, and the interaction between them feels very real. (I also love your take on the eleventh). The way you write Zaraki is refreshing, and I like the way you describe his relationship with others, especially Yachiru. It was so adorable and funny, and that is something that doesn't always work with a character like Kenpachi, but it defintely did here. Hisagi's introspection is also so much fun to read, and seeing his character grow, following him as he drops Tousen's teachings, one by one, and starting to form his own opinions about things is very interesting. I just adored the small scene when he got the "insane urge to kick the door in" :) .

Anyways, I'm really looking forward to seeing the rest of this, and I hope you will deliver the fourth (and final, right?) installation soon. I am very curious to see how you will actually get these two to start a relationship, and how it will work out. After all, Zaraki is a difficult character to work with in these situations... in my opinion anyway...

Much love...