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for Obsidian and Alabaster

by orionshadow

person Toast
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you haven't given up on your stories here because they're all awesome. I check every day to see if a new chapter has been uploaded. I just hope that one day soon it will be. =)
person Toast
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just thought i'd drop you a message to say that this was yet another fantastic chapter. I love Zraki's impatience and the way you describe him is so true to form. Thank you. I just hope fuji therapy 2 comes soon. (n_n)
person Jennyt82
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have got to love the way Zaraki thinks! Or at least i do and i love how you write him. If that's how he says sorry then i want him to be sorry for a lot of things. Another great chapter but what else can we expect from the great OrionShadow?
person Kashima
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this was one of the most amusing chapters i have ever read. Watching kenpachi try to keep his cool while engaging in activity most men dread was hilarious. The woman trying to seduce him was also a nice touch its always touching to see just how enamored zaraki and matsumoto are with each other. As always Orion kudos and keep up the good work.
person collegeplusgirl
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good companion piece to Different Circumstances. Rock on!
person Kashima
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and entertaining chapter. Its good to get updates to the lighter side of the main stories every once in a while. I can't wait to see what happens during the shopping trip. As always kudos and its better than the source material that spawned it.
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more soon!
person Jennyt82
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well you know you'll never hear a bad word from me. I loved the chapter as i love each and every one in this series. The only bad thing i do have to say is that it took too long to hear from you. :< Please don't leave us in the dark for so long again. I look forward to getting another update in anyone of your chapters any day now....Is it tomorrow yet? Lol.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha...awesome fic...I like how it accompanies "Different Circumstances" I LOVE that fic too!!!
person Jennyt82
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're back!!! Fantastic! The chapter was brilliant as always, it made my day when i saw the update. Hopefully the next update will be soon.
All the best.