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for Obsidian and Alabaster

by orionshadow

schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I could wring your skinny neck!! Don't ever do that to me again! My heart was in my eyeballs! You're just like a boyfriend, making me go through all these emotional changes. And through it all, I still love you lol. I love the insight into Zaraki's feelings. I always knew he had a deeper soul. I feel the same way about Bya-chan. Good work...I just need time to get over my emotional trauma. *-*
person Bilbo
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty darn good. I like the pairing.
person Amysama
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice side story, it keeps us entertained.

If you have more, keep them coming.
person RexJNibcore
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Them being married was a bit of a surprise, but I liked it. It was very unexpected.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too cute!!! She plays the harlot quite well, reminds me of sometimes when I...um anyway, good one-shot. And I didn't cough once while reading!

*Is proud*
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that. It was cool to see Zaraki's take on their relationship. And it was very hot!