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for Minutes to Midnight

by Crya2Evans

person Kuromei
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't let my brother know, since Hitsugaya is his favorite captain, but I always thought that I could live without Snowy-chan. =/ Poor Izuru, though. I can't imagine what he would have gone through after Gin left (I haven't been able to watch Bleach because I work Sat. nights. TT__TT) ...But, as always, I want to know! Good thing that bit is the next update. =3

I look forward to more! =D
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter. Can't wait to see more sooN!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gory but very interesting. You have a wicked mind :P I really liked that bit where Ichigo hesitate and, in the end, couldn't go through with it. That's his character through and through. Ooh, can't wait to see what you have planned for Kenpachi, gotta love that guy ;) Thanks for the update, it was great.
person steisi
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was justice a la 'an eye for an eye' if I've ever seen it! I'm mostly speaking on Ichigo and Inoue's behalf, since I'm stil not entirely sure on the history between Hitsugaya and Izuru. I mean, she comes off as pretty naive and somewhat oblivious (to certain things; other times she can be surprisingly perceptive), but Orihime's always been such a sweet, pure character. And Hitsugaya's tendency to follow orders and on the whole behave as if he has something bery large and blunt shoved up unmentionable places has always annoyed me beyond reason. Serves him right, I'd say. I'm not all that shocked that Ichigo couldn't deal the final blow hmself though. Despite it all, I think you did the right thing in you decision to have Izuru finish Hitsugaya off; it helped balance Ichigo's earlier uncharacteristic cruelty and keep him in character. What else...Ah, yes, the scene where Shinsui witnessed Ichigo and Gin kissing. That was pretty hilarious, I think. A nice counterbalance to the overall dark feeling of the chapter. I really loved it. That's it for now, I guess. I can't wait for the next chapter and possibly Yamamoto's reaction to whatever Ichigo and Gin have in store for him! Kisses, love!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh, that was dark. And I loved it! Very well done. And very bloody. :)
I really liked how you went quickly to other people and their little sights of things. Very effective!!
Brilliant! I can't wait for the rest!!! *Is impatient*
person english muffin
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Izuru! Is it bad that this chapter made me want to ship Gin/Izuru? ^^; They were so cute when they met up; their hug made me fangirl inside (maybe I totally ship them always? -fret-). I'm very frightened whatever has to do with Yamamoto's anything...but I can only guess it'll lead to hot Yamamoto-less steaminess? Next chapter, please. :D
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review this; it's such a great story! It's not like 'Ichigo goes dark, gets a new make-over, becomes a goth, murders all of Soul Society, which is apparently not something rather disturbing'. You still keep Ichigo Ichigo (although, a little bit more blood-thirsty :P ) and Gin is so amazing *longing sigh*.

Glad Kira's in it, and I love Hitsugaya, but every story needs it's bad guys/girls. Just wish it didn't have to be someone so adorable! But Hitsugaya hated Aizen, so he wouldn't have joined him.

Are Renji and Rukia going to come into this? Please don't say you're going to make Kenpachi as awful as Hitsugaya, he's amazing :P

Keep going, I love this!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, I love Kira!! X3 aren't they all just too cute! Hehehe, I like all the target practice that Ichigo is getting in. He should be improving quite a bit after this little escapade. Can't WAIT to read more!!! *bounces* <3<3
person Kuromei
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm racing the clock here, so let me just say that the list rocks! XD I wanna know what their going to do at Yamamoto's place! ...Like I don't already know. X3

Love ya, Draco-san! Keep it up! XD
person steisi
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I so loved this chapter! Hehehe, I really had fun, love, that's for sure. Gin wasn't kidding about that list. And I'm so very curious about that mysterious "Yamamoto's...", whatever it is! I have an idea, but I bet you'd still surprise me. And Izuru's finally on board! Yay! I've always liked him, and felt really sad when they showed him right after the betrayal. He looked like a puppy abandoned by its master...I just wanted to grab him and zqueese, ya know?! In any event, I'm extremely anxious about the next chapter. Will Ichigo, Gin, and Kira make it without opposition, or will they come face to face with Ichigo's one-time-friends? Will they get whatever ambarrassing belonging of Yamamoto's they're after? Will Ichigo accidentally blow up half of Seireitei with his dodgy kido?! So many unanswered questions! We can only wait and see...Kisses, sugar!
P.S.
The glimpses of the missing few months in Gin and Ichigo's relationship sounded great; I'll be looking forward to those!