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for Tales of a Broken Society

by Strailo

person liz2008
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please can you do an update to this story soon. please do a sequel to the last chapter that you just did. please let ichigo be the bottom and submissive to both of the men. please give him the ability to become pregnant.
person GeneralSephiroth
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
note: i'm using my ff.net name. I was wondering if you could do a sequal to locked in a closet, where ichigo gives birth(yay!) and Grimmjow visits because he is bored and ends up babysitting the baby so the two new parents can have a break, also this ends up being the first time he's seen a 'baby', and it tries to gum his fingers cuz its teething. :3 (and other funny baby situations)

aka a Grimmjow story only the pairing is Byakuya/Ichigo still.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your story they so sweet or so hot and i do have a few request myself and i hope that it's not to many and i not really good with plot-bunnies put i'll try first should make a part two with the aizen and ichigo story and a part two with the byakuya/ukitake(sp)/ichigo lol but the ones i want is ichigo/hitsugaya and plot would be that hitsugaya is in love with ichigo and doesn't know how to tell him but he finds out and they become lovers and the other story is a ichigo and grimmjow and aizen. ichigo has to choose which one he want but he can't so they desided to get together anyways i know my ideals my suck but please them anyways ok please ^_^? thankyou
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please show me kenpachi ichigo or hanataro ichigo
person Afrieal
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(dumping out drool tub) Thanks Af's off in a corner giggling like an idiot at the thought of those two well that and we were listening to the angst writing mix Yamma made us and blackbird by the beatles was playing when we read this chapter and for some strange reason it fit. Thnanks for considering our idea I think it came from listing to an old David bowie song called fashion when looking at Shonen Jump magazine or something

Je Ne
Rysha and Affie
person Liz
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was FABULOUS... It's true.. people do think Ikkaku holds the leash in that relationship...
person Afrieal
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!!! I love what you've done (looking to the side) I think Rysh is out of it for a while you do great work 'course reading all 13 chapters was a bit much for the poor dear when she's taken migraine meds she's murmering something about Yumi and Ishida plotline hmmm fashion both are good with types of beauty and i know doing measurements can lead to some interesting well lets just say measuring my sweetie lead to fun with the silk ribbons i had for my Renfaire costumes maybe you could do something with that???

cheers
afrieal and a drooling Rysha
person Liz
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

You Updated!!! SMEXY THREESOME!!!!
Oh and I forgot to ask what color did you dye your hair?
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The phrase *Sugar Daddy* pops up as I read the last chapter, which sent me in giggles!!! ^_____^
person crammer
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, thanks a lot for granting my request, it was soo nice and fluffy, though the hotness and kink were strongly hinted. i stumbled upon this fic just now, and i realized i was waay behind the chapters, the last one i read was #5. there was a lot of byaxichi, they're just soo hot together, but also love the rest of the pairings you did! really, you made everyone's imagination go wild. I think ichigo is favorite mpreg uke.. oh, and i second spidergurl's request for a shunsuixukitake hard yaoi!! since there was fluff, there's gotta be an explicit one too in that pairing ;)!

oh, and i have another request, a yummixikkaku bondage hard yaoi fic -> in the eyes of the shinigami, yummi is ikkaku's boytoy, but the truth is, behind closed doors, yummi's in control.. this idea just popped into my mind when i saw Anon's review saying that 'yumi is ikkaku's boytoy'.. i just wanted a little twist to that statement ;p i hope you'll consider it..

thanks so much for feeding out overactive imaginations, these chapters are really thumbs up great! hope you'll keep them coming..!