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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, mindfuck.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting take on this pairing, I liked it and the slight angst that you put in it, hope to read more of your stuff
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Smexy, I luv Gin-uke.(^_~)
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! I thoroughly enjoyed that right the way through. It was a totally fresh and original look at their relationship, completely different from anything I have come across before, and it worked wonderfully. I wouldn't have expected such a thing to work out as naturally as it did. I really commend you for swapping things about to create a very different, and perfectly in character, tale of yum. It was beautifully sexy, and very well written too.
I like that you used the Japanese terms, also. I always like it when authors do, because I either understand them, or it forces me to expand my knowledge of the language (which I am, somewhat lazily, attempting to learn). I always like to give some form of constructive opinion, advice or criticism in my reviews, as it is something I really appreciate being given about my own fiction, but I am finding it rather difficult to find fault. I can find nothing wrong with your story-telling or characterisation, and in fact I really think I could learn a lot from your talents myself, but I shall point out that my dictionary of punctuation says that when writing dialogue, that the end of a sentence in the speech shouldn't necessarily have a full stop. Erm... an example! Like it should be:
"The tree is pink," the boy declared.
Rather than:
"The tree is pink." The boy declared.
Although it says if you want to begin a new sentence right after the speech then one should use a full-stop. Like:
"Stop." The man's anger was apparent.
Erm, so yeah... I know some people don't like to have criticism, however constructive the intent, but I really like to receive it, and so I always give help or pointers where I can. I want to do everything to improve my writing, so I assume that most other authors are similar in their appreciation of the opinions of other writers. Anyway, I should probably stop typing now, as I daresay if I haven't already become repetetive, I soon will.
Oh, also, I'm in agreement with the above reviewer. To those who tend to look at review before reading: I highly recommend this fiction to any fans of this pairing, and hell, to anybody else as well. It's brilliant!
I like that you used the Japanese terms, also. I always like it when authors do, because I either understand them, or it forces me to expand my knowledge of the language (which I am, somewhat lazily, attempting to learn). I always like to give some form of constructive opinion, advice or criticism in my reviews, as it is something I really appreciate being given about my own fiction, but I am finding it rather difficult to find fault. I can find nothing wrong with your story-telling or characterisation, and in fact I really think I could learn a lot from your talents myself, but I shall point out that my dictionary of punctuation says that when writing dialogue, that the end of a sentence in the speech shouldn't necessarily have a full stop. Erm... an example! Like it should be:
"The tree is pink," the boy declared.
Rather than:
"The tree is pink." The boy declared.
Although it says if you want to begin a new sentence right after the speech then one should use a full-stop. Like:
"Stop." The man's anger was apparent.
Erm, so yeah... I know some people don't like to have criticism, however constructive the intent, but I really like to receive it, and so I always give help or pointers where I can. I want to do everything to improve my writing, so I assume that most other authors are similar in their appreciation of the opinions of other writers. Anyway, I should probably stop typing now, as I daresay if I haven't already become repetetive, I soon will.
Oh, also, I'm in agreement with the above reviewer. To those who tend to look at review before reading: I highly recommend this fiction to any fans of this pairing, and hell, to anybody else as well. It's brilliant!