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by Macht

person Anon
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drools on you* Well, I love it. And I'm putting my two cents in for more.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It makes a nice one shot.

Maybe you need to develop it a tiny bit more though? It just seems a little, unfinished.