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I'm enjoying these. I look forward to more.

you were so close to making me cry with that last chapter... wow, that kiss scene: so beautiful!!
ahhhhh and now i feel so sorry for him... bya's not in the best state in my fic right now either... poor guy, really. people who don't like him can say what they want, but i don't think he has it easy, really...

Chapter 3 was just so heartbreaking but beautiful too, it's nice to see that side of Byakuya instead of just the emotionless man that he's portrayed as all too often. They were all really well written though and I look forward to more chapters :)

and you really can be proud of it! i could find nothing wrong with it, if i searched! gin is a mystery to me, too, so you have my respect for getting him down like that. i think the whole things works very well from orihime's point of view, i think it probably would have been impossible to write it from gin's (at least i know i couldn't do it)
i feel her fear flowing into me through your words, keeping me as frozen in front of the screen as she stood in front of him
you have my applause! ^^

i can honestly say i am proud, having provided you with inspiration for this. you capture a time frame of what... a few seconds? but what you manage to get across is an aeon of feeling. i'm getting as lost in this moment as the characters, and when their lips finally are about to meet i am just as breathless. wonderful. really, you have no reason whatsoever to hide your writing. none. i am lucky today. i have found another writer of fanfiction i enjoy reading. that makes a group of four now ^^

Wow! Your story really draws people in, it's so breathtakingly beautiful, I really don't know what to say. ByakuyaxRenji is one of my favorite yaoi Bleach pairings and you did this well with neither of them being out of character, good job! ^_^

I, like yourself am also struggling as an author currently. I can understand the desire to experiment with a seris of drabbles as I am thinking of doing something along the same lines for similar reasons.

OrihimexGin ne? Ooohh! I can't wait to see that! I have wondered what that couple would be like and I don't think I've seen them before. I adore Gin! Exactly what are you having trouble with? Maybe I can help. E-mail me or Msn me via the address below:

MidnightFantasyAngel@hotmail.com

By the way, are you taking requests, because I have a few in mind...^_^; let me know on both of these subjects. Ja! ^_^