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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perferctly portioned progression. Sounds like a tongue twister, but you do it with such skill.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ichigo! *wipes tears away* I know that feeling all too well...
I'm glad that Ichigo realized what he feels for Byakuya, but it sucks that it came at a crappy time.
I'm glad that Ichigo realized what he feels for Byakuya, but it sucks that it came at a crappy time.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well handled, the conversation had the right amount of pain for it to be believable. I almost wanted to cry with them.
I'm so happy though that Ichigo has realised and is sort of ready to accept his feelings for Byakuya. Now if Bya-kun would just stop being so damn stubborn... XD
I'm so happy though that Ichigo has realised and is sort of ready to accept his feelings for Byakuya. Now if Bya-kun would just stop being so damn stubborn... XD
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even though I don't like Ichi/Ruki, I found this scene very touching. ^_^ Nice job!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a thery, I think Byakuya will not admit he loves Ichigo unless A) Ichigo confesses to him to his face. Or B) Ichigo is put in a sitchuation where he is injured to the point of a comoa or near death. Thus giving Byakuya the kick he needs to realise what everyone else sees, including Ichigo. Good story so far, I was up till 1:22am reading this, and too tired after words to review, so I'm doing so now. I'm eager to see when Byakuya is going to realise he does love him, and WHEN IN THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO KISS DAMNIT!?
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes it is I, the freeloader who reads every new chapter with rapt attention and yet doesn't have the heart to always leave a review. For that, I apologize.
Although I may not review every chapter, I certainly cherish every new installment more then any other Bleach fanfic I have ever read. The slow pace that you have set for this story is absolutely perfect and I wouldn't have it any other way. To me, character development is more important then plot-less sex (although a god dose of sex is worth the read from time to time) and more enjoyable.
With every chapter, Itchigo and Hime-sama -That nick-name is just too cute- become a little more aware of each other. There small actions that were disregarded are now being questioned. Something is obviously formulating between the two, and yet everyone sees it except them. Which makes everything that much more exciting.
All the characters are wonderfully portrayed, even the OC's i;e Itchigo's children. It is such a joy to read every new chapter. The fast updates are much appreciated. I check for updates twice a day, sometimes more depending on my level of desperation, but I'm usually not disappointed. The length of every chapter is also greatly appreciated, they fill the void in my days.
But enough of my long winded review. What I just want to say is 'keep up the great work'. Let the plot slowly build up. Take your time with the characters, add in some more Itchigo and Hime-sama interaction. But whatever you do, just remember to have fun writing. Don't take everything too serious, and just let the words flow and unleash your passion for writing (I know every author, including myself, has) and go with the flow.
I might not review every chapter, but please know that I watch out for every new update diligently. I savor every chapter I read.
And for the bottom of my heart, I thank you.
I thank you for writing a story that is so compelling and well written.
I thank you for writing a story that has my favorite pairing and not rushing the plot.
But most of all, I thank you, the ever diligent author that every week has a new chapter waiting for readers, even when you only get a few reviews here and there.
Your fan,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
Although I may not review every chapter, I certainly cherish every new installment more then any other Bleach fanfic I have ever read. The slow pace that you have set for this story is absolutely perfect and I wouldn't have it any other way. To me, character development is more important then plot-less sex (although a god dose of sex is worth the read from time to time) and more enjoyable.
With every chapter, Itchigo and Hime-sama -That nick-name is just too cute- become a little more aware of each other. There small actions that were disregarded are now being questioned. Something is obviously formulating between the two, and yet everyone sees it except them. Which makes everything that much more exciting.
All the characters are wonderfully portrayed, even the OC's i;e Itchigo's children. It is such a joy to read every new chapter. The fast updates are much appreciated. I check for updates twice a day, sometimes more depending on my level of desperation, but I'm usually not disappointed. The length of every chapter is also greatly appreciated, they fill the void in my days.
But enough of my long winded review. What I just want to say is 'keep up the great work'. Let the plot slowly build up. Take your time with the characters, add in some more Itchigo and Hime-sama interaction. But whatever you do, just remember to have fun writing. Don't take everything too serious, and just let the words flow and unleash your passion for writing (I know every author, including myself, has) and go with the flow.
I might not review every chapter, but please know that I watch out for every new update diligently. I savor every chapter I read.
And for the bottom of my heart, I thank you.
I thank you for writing a story that is so compelling and well written.
I thank you for writing a story that has my favorite pairing and not rushing the plot.
But most of all, I thank you, the ever diligent author that every week has a new chapter waiting for readers, even when you only get a few reviews here and there.
Your fan,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD I like parts of the latest filler arc, mainly Amagai Shuusuke (cute taichou :3) and Kifune Makoto. The whole princess thing is stupid though..she's an annoying little brat. Anyways, keep up the good work with this one. I loved that Zangetsu made an appearance. (xD I think he's hot. xDDDD) Looking forward to more of this story soon!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Another "Talk with your Zanpakutou" moment, this time starring Ichigo! XD *giggle* At least Ichi is a little more accepting of Zangetsu's insinuations than Byakushi was of Senbonzakura's. X3 It's nice to see a little bit of progress in that direction.
...I can see if I squint. lol XD
Anyhoo, great job as always! I look forward to the next update, whenever you manage to get through the writer's block and post it. ^w^ *hugs*
...I can see if I squint. lol XD
Anyhoo, great job as always! I look forward to the next update, whenever you manage to get through the writer's block and post it. ^w^ *hugs*
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh they are so close to noticing. GAHH! They both know they should be together, but just can't admit it. I just want to slam their heads together and go "just do it, all ready!" Still love the story and still can't wait for more.