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by Crya2Evans

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The newest filler arc I take it is the new captain one?? I was a little peeved with that as well. You're not allowed to get writers block by the way XD
I liked the Rukia / Byakuya convo. It seemed to fit for them and I liked that it wasn't shouted accusations or demands for anything, it was just the simple truth that they both know.
I loved that Shunsui told Ichigo that he wasn't as oblivious as Byakuya, that was almost a compliment. And yay, they're both finally admiting the truth, albeit hesitantly.
I really do love this story.
person Ranna
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to finally be able to see Zangetsu. I've missed him. By the way, it's totally fine with me if you need more time to complete the chapters. I want it good, and your satisfaction with your work is a big factor in how a story proceeds.
person english muffin
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, things seemed to heat up! I really really liked this chapter. I can't wait for the next one! >w<
person Kuromei
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao I can just see that game now. X3 *imagines* ... *cold shivers* I was never really that feminine. XP

Anyhoo, I love the abundance of plot, as always. ^w^ I'm always waiting for more. =3 *hugs*
person Yakumo
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty Pretty Princess...that's a freakin awesome name for a game. XD You should go into some detail about it next time. XDDDD
person Ranna
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are we going to get to see Rukia's side now? I'm looking forward to getting more insight into her character.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally called that it was going to be Pretty Pretty Princess. I keep trying to get my husband to play it with our daughter. Anyway, great chapter. The reality of the whole separation thing is hard to read, but makes it that much better. The story is just awesome. I feel so bad for Byakuya. I mean, you're supposed to be on the side of your family, but when it's their fault... ugh, this story is so close to home. I just wanted to say everything seems to be captured perfectly.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The ending was perfect. The part with Rukia was really sad and the ending kinda lifted my spirits a little.
I was wondering when the Byakuya/Rukia convo was gonna come. I've been imagining accusations and home truths all aimed Byakuya's way. He's not gonna be able to deny his feelings for long after that.
Byakuya playing pretty, pretty princess *giggle snort*
Next chapter please.
person Isa383
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say...this is a wonderfully written story. I have enjoyed the pace at which you are taking this story. A story like this has to develop slowly. The dynamic between Ichigo and Byakuya is incredible and the way you have depicted Rukia doesn't make the reader hate her, but feel for her. She is what my sister calls "on the outside looking in" and she feels helpless. She sees what Ichigo and Byakuya do not see...their love for each other...and that hurts her so much. I look forward the the talk between Rukia and her brother...I am certain it will be interesting and enlightening. On a lighter note...I LOVED the Pretty, Pretty Princess episode...that was soooooo funny. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter update. Great Job!!!!!
person english muffin
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Rukia, I go through stages of love and hate for you. Another good chapter; I always like seeing the plot from different characters. It feels like the ByaIchi is so far away, but it'll be sweet when we finally get there. Can't wait for the next chapter.