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by Crya2Evans

person Ranna
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't want you to speed up your plot for anything. Shame on those people who only think of the smut value of the story! I want you to keep going exactly as you are!
person Yakumo
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm..now that you mention it, I suppose she wasn't as annoying before Hueco Mundo, but she still gets on my nerves in my opinion. -Huggles Renji- Renji-kun = LOVE. I hope to see some Byakuya soon. Byakuya also is LOVE. xD The 6th division has the sexy officers. :3
person Kuromei
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* Your skill never ceases to amaze me, Draco-san. It really does. My heart ached as I read this chapter, especially when Kaien and Syaoran tried to get answers.

I said it once, I'll say it again: You are an amazing author.

Keep it up, Draco-san! ^w^
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just want to grab Byakuya's shoulders and shake him!!! I think he's gotten used to living in denial so much that he can't seem to drag himself out.
I loved how the kids ended up in bed with him and I know it said that it was all the comfort he could give but I think they were giving him more comfort than he could offer them.
I love Renji, he's just such a good character. I love how fast he was talking and that she had to translate it. It took me a second to split the words up too and I was reading them XD The rumour mills don't know how close to the truth they are.
I really look forward to the next chapter and can't believe that you're nearly half-way through this.
person english muffin
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I so love Zaraki. Just when things were about to get really angsty, he comes to save the day (not that i don't like the angst. :D) Another good chapter; I like how this story is more about plot than about a pairing. It's refreshing that the couple is taking second to family/friend matters. Can't wait for the next installment!
person Kuromei
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* More Kenpachi-messing-with-Byakushi's-head time! I love it! XD And major "awwwww~" for the scene between Orihime and Rukia. It's nice to know that one of their friends understands.

lol I loved those two drabbles! XD ...Then again, I love everything that I've read from you so that's no surprise. ^w^ I look forward to more, as always! =D
person Ranna
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, joy. Good fic at last. Thank you for your frequent updates, I really appreciate it. And thank you for PLOT!!! It really is a nice change from some of the others stories I've been reading lately.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love Orihime sometimes, even though she started out as Ichigo's friend she's still not willing to turn on Rukia. If I were Rukia though I'd be scared of her little warning. I love that even after so many years Orihime still has that cheery outlook on life.

I like that you've tied in your wonderful on going series too. When I read the bit about Kenpachi having a kid it took me a few minutes to place that it's from seritai monogatari (bad spelling I know).

Hope you update soon 'cos this is really good and soooooo adictive. XD
person Yakumo
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, except that I'm not a fan of Renji/Orihime. In fact, Orihime's my least favorite character. Renji on the other hand...-hugs him tight- xD Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you don't get mad or anything at me for this review. T_T
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You have returned! Once again you have completed a nice long chapter that has the readers asking for more. I hope you find the time to update again soon.