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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Byakuya punching Kenpachi? Priceless. I loled when he did that!!
Another great chapter though I'm still quite confused with Rukia's reasons for hitting Ichigo. Correct me if I'm wrong is it a combination of jealousy and frustration which led her to take it out on Ichigo?
Another great chapter though I'm still quite confused with Rukia's reasons for hitting Ichigo. Correct me if I'm wrong is it a combination of jealousy and frustration which led her to take it out on Ichigo?
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I finally managed to make myself write a review for this wonderful story of yours, which happens to be the best yaoi fanfiction i have ever set my eyes on. Seriously, it's amazing, makes me wait for the next chapter with anticipation :)
I decided to write one review to all the chapters so far, instead of reviewing each of them. So, lets start with what I really like about this fic.
First of all, it's the idea. I really loved it and it makes this fic really unique from others.
Secondly, I like the characters, all of them, actually (though I don't really like how you describe Ichigo's father, a little offensive, but that's just my opinion) but Byakuya - his personality is probably the most interesting and amazing :)
I also like the fact, that you are concentrating mainly on one couple, not like some authors, who couple-up almost all male characters in the show. This way, the love you are describing seems even more heartwarming and special.
I'm also glad that you don't make women look stupid and completely unnecessary in the world. Your fic is realistic at that aspect. Same goes for the fact, that love between males and females is actually POSSIBLE (I know it's an obvious thing, but most yaoi fangirls seem to forget about it xD)
I really enjoyed the fic so far and can't wait till the next chapter :)
P.S. So sorry for such a long review ^^' I got a little carried away :P
I decided to write one review to all the chapters so far, instead of reviewing each of them. So, lets start with what I really like about this fic.
First of all, it's the idea. I really loved it and it makes this fic really unique from others.
Secondly, I like the characters, all of them, actually (though I don't really like how you describe Ichigo's father, a little offensive, but that's just my opinion) but Byakuya - his personality is probably the most interesting and amazing :)
I also like the fact, that you are concentrating mainly on one couple, not like some authors, who couple-up almost all male characters in the show. This way, the love you are describing seems even more heartwarming and special.
I'm also glad that you don't make women look stupid and completely unnecessary in the world. Your fic is realistic at that aspect. Same goes for the fact, that love between males and females is actually POSSIBLE (I know it's an obvious thing, but most yaoi fangirls seem to forget about it xD)
I really enjoyed the fic so far and can't wait till the next chapter :)
P.S. So sorry for such a long review ^^' I got a little carried away :P
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good to have you back. I'm looking forward to more updates!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol XD *sings* Shunsui's gonna geee~t iii~t! XDD But wow, that was a surprising move on Byakuya's part. O__o;; ...Let's hope there's more...though of a lusty nature. X3
Great work, as always! =D
Great work, as always! =D
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your way of filling in the background info on the war. And it does not surprise me in the least that Captain's meetings are very boring and unnesessary.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DRACO I MISSED YOU!!!!~ *Have a big Nell Glomp* and what a great chapter!!! Bya-Kun Punching Kenpachi, the last throse of the final battle, Shunsui 'bout to get bitch-slapped...WIN!
Rukia's confession on her relationship with Ichigo and Byakuya was very sad and beautifully done. Its nice to see the regret and resentment coming from her because of those two, an Jyuushirou's struggle to not condone her utterly like Seretei has done.
Once again, GLAD YOU'RE BACK!
Rukia's confession on her relationship with Ichigo and Byakuya was very sad and beautifully done. Its nice to see the regret and resentment coming from her because of those two, an Jyuushirou's struggle to not condone her utterly like Seretei has done.
Once again, GLAD YOU'RE BACK!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I love when humor and plot is mixed up like this. Slowly but surely Byakushi and Ichigo will be together, hurrah~ And...Aizen/Ura makes me so emo in this fic. D:
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. I'm glad your internet is working again. I know how much it sucks when it doesn't work. This story is good. It's one of the few that I always hope has been updated when I come looking.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last bit had me in stiches. The way Ichigo just calmly brought up the topic and then stopped him from leaving by standing on his pink thing (I'm terible with the japanese words and spellings!!)
I loved it when Byakuya punched Zaraki, that was priceless and I'm so glad that Rukia has someone she can talk to.
Loved the update, more soon please.
I'm so glad you got your internet back.
I loved it when Byakuya punched Zaraki, that was priceless and I'm so glad that Rukia has someone she can talk to.
Loved the update, more soon please.
I'm so glad you got your internet back.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter is really cute! It's nice to see a little light-heartedness. I wish Ichigo and Byakuya could spend more alone time together. Isshin was also fun to read about. :D I can't wait for the next chapter.