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by Crya2Evans

schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Or perhaps Shunsui when he was on a Jyuushiro hunt, his voice echoing throughout the many divisions."
That is sooooo adorable~ (Shunsui:"don't mind me, i'm off on a Jyuushiro hunt!") I can see that in the Anime! X3

It seems like Byakuya is finally starting to admit to himself that there's a little more than Brotherly love with him and Ichigo. (Thanks to that Zakari voice in his head! XP) pity that Ichigo refuses to reach that conclusion as well, or maybe he has and just ignores it... though, by the way he still remisess of Rukia in his head, it seems that his heart still refuses to let Rukia go. it's admirable of Ichigo still fighting to keep his marriage together, though it may lead to another row with Rukia. We'll just see later on...

This was a cute chapter with them together family bonding! Its nice to hear about everyone in the future. (I never thought I'll hear about Afro-Guy again! lol!) smart ex-captain. funny where Ichigo imagined that Ukitake is his father. (but who'll be Mommy?! Kira? Shunsui?! (my vote's one Shun here!) That was cute! Great work and I look forward to the next chapter!
person Kuromei
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww~ Ichi and Byakushi on a daaaa~te! XD *shot* *rises from the grave* ANYhoo! This was a great chapter! ^w^ I loved it when Ichigo scared Zennosuke shitless. X3 *lols a bit* And the walks down memory lane. I really like it when things are seen through Byakuya's eyes. Dunno why, I just like the way you write him. ^w^

Aaaanyway~ great work as always, Draco-san! ^o^
person Yakumo
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the old, still crazy Isshin. :D Keep up the good work with this!
person Ranna
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite things about your stories is how you provide all the little details. That is what really makes it an interesting read. Keep it up!
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are so sweet!! I keep wanting them to trip and accidentally kiss or something, it's the fangirl in me, I can't shut her up XD I love Isshin, he may act like a total dweeb but he is quite perceptive at times. I can't imagine Ichigo as calm and patient, to me he'll always be the brash teenager that I saw the first time I saw the anime. I love that Ishida ended up with Tatsuki, it's not a pair I had ever even considered but I like it.
I suppose I should put the obligatory update soon but I'm more than willing to wait for this, it's just so good that as long as you keep updating I'd wait forever.
person english muffin
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I think Karin was being a total bitch when she was trying to get the story out of ichigo when the children were around. It made me not like her much. >.< I can't wait for the next part!
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So....thirty five years....So its safe to say that Ichigo and Orihime are "Dead"? considering that both live in Seretei and do Isshin and Urahara look the same since they have Gigais?
I can tell very easily that you are hung over Urahara and Aizen lol! X3
Children and their parents shouldn't be playing favorites, but its funny that the Kids and Ichigo lean towards Jyuushirou than Isshin for Grandfather! (Isshin got saddled to the back?!?! *Sucks to be him...>>;)
hmmmm, I'll be PM you with my Story request this morning...its not for a few chapters ad its pretty short but humourous! ^_____^
person Kuromei
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes! Shattered Children's update was a wonderful birthday present. =3

Oooooh~ Family tension! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! X3 *huggles*
person SaCyner
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how could karin do that? asking such painful things in front of the kids. i know she is probably protecting ichigo in her own way but hello, a bit more sensitivity in front of the kids especially she is an adult herself. great story by the ways, keeps me hooked and looking forward for the next update!!
person Yakumo
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. <3 Isshin and Urahara FTW! -huggles Ichigo- Poor Ichi-kun...