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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definately needs new babysitters!! XD
Love the half chapter and can't wait for the next one, short review again 'cos I gotta get some sleep.
Love the half chapter and can't wait for the next one, short review again 'cos I gotta get some sleep.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for Zaraki! Byakuya needed that kick in the rear. *nods* Of course, Byakuya's denial, internally and verbally was hilarious. X3 lol XD He just couldn't keep up with Kenpachi. =3
Myu? You're offering to write a fic, even though you're so busy, just because it was my birthday the last time you updated? O////O Uhm...does it have to be a whole different fic? Or can I request an update to Shattered Children? You have my email, if you want to talk about this privately. =3
Myu? You're offering to write a fic, even though you're so busy, just because it was my birthday the last time you updated? O////O Uhm...does it have to be a whole different fic? Or can I request an update to Shattered Children? You have my email, if you want to talk about this privately. =3
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm imagining Ichigo wearing that Dark blue Yukata...looks nice! XD
Anyways, a thumbs up for you with the Byakuya/Zakari converstation at the start! Despite their differences I bet their banter would've been funny to start with.
Ichigo's begining to break in the seams, though he's still trying to find that stable ground, but judging by the sake-drinking...He honestly doesn't know what to save his marriage. I get the feeling that a small part of Ichi is aware of his attraction to Byakuya unlike the latter. Which makes it all the more sadder for him since he really can't make a decsion.
Yeah it must be real terrible for Ukitake as he sees Shunsui drink himself to Oblivion...most people close to an Alcoholic would give up and leave, but no...not our Uki-chan! *Its one the things that make me love those two! X3*
Anyways, i'll see you by the next chapter of one of your several works!
P.S: By anycase I can post a request for Seireitei Monogatari here? or should I PM you?~
Anyways, a thumbs up for you with the Byakuya/Zakari converstation at the start! Despite their differences I bet their banter would've been funny to start with.
Ichigo's begining to break in the seams, though he's still trying to find that stable ground, but judging by the sake-drinking...He honestly doesn't know what to save his marriage. I get the feeling that a small part of Ichi is aware of his attraction to Byakuya unlike the latter. Which makes it all the more sadder for him since he really can't make a decsion.
Yeah it must be real terrible for Ukitake as he sees Shunsui drink himself to Oblivion...most people close to an Alcoholic would give up and leave, but no...not our Uki-chan! *Its one the things that make me love those two! X3*
Anyways, i'll see you by the next chapter of one of your several works!
P.S: By anycase I can post a request for Seireitei Monogatari here? or should I PM you?~
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been by far the best chapter yet.I am glad that Zaraki has planted the seed of awareness in Byak. Things will be more interesting now. The emotion in this chapter was dead on, and made it completely worth the wait. As always, you leave your readers craving more. I find myself checking for updates at least five times a day. Your story is highly addictive. I wish you luck on writing the next chapter and I hope you find the time to update again soon.
And as always, thank you for sharing such a inspiring story.
Your eager fan, rAiNwAtEr
And as always, thank you for sharing such a inspiring story.
Your eager fan, rAiNwAtEr
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hanatarou is so adorable. I love him.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I really liked this chapter! It's nice to see some movement toward byakuya and ichigo's relationship. You know it's good when I'm actually reading a story that has plot. ^^ It seems really sad to me that Rukia moved out, even though I like yaoi. D: I think I'm just worrying about the kids and Ichigo's well-being. I hope that Byakuya will make a good mommy. Please, keep it up! I really like where the story is going. And I love how the characters are in character, which authors sometimes lose when they try dramatic stories like these.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
There were a few parts of this that needed pointing out.
"He loves her."
“But he loves you more.”
I squee'd. ♥
Did anyone get the name of the Espada that had stomped up and down on his head?
That one line had me in stitches I was laughing so hard XDD
There were a few parts of this that needed pointing out.
"He loves her."
“But he loves you more.”
I squee'd. ♥
Did anyone get the name of the Espada that had stomped up and down on his head?
That one line had me in stitches I was laughing so hard XDD
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved drunk Ichigo, and the convo between Byakuya and Zaraki was priceless. Byakuya can be really dense sometimes! XD Ok I've got to be up for work in 5 and a half hours so long review next chapter.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWW poor Ichigo...-hugs him tightly- I liked this chapter as well. ^_^ Nice job with it.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't get to review the last chapter..(I really couldn't think of anything really....)
Jeezus Renji! WTF you came up with those questions?! you think he knows Rukia enough to actually pose the Question. And Ichigo playing the wearing parent struggling to keep the family together...by anycase a breakdown for either Ichigo and/or Rukia for the future?
Ichigo and Byakuya...they seem not to see the signals between each other. Their reactions to Rukia's accusation of there's something more than friendship between them is too humorous. I'm happy that you showed the aftermath on Rukia's part as well. Yes, she is definatly having as hard a time with this as Ichigo. Nay I say it, WAY HARDER...
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. Later!~
Jeezus Renji! WTF you came up with those questions?! you think he knows Rukia enough to actually pose the Question. And Ichigo playing the wearing parent struggling to keep the family together...by anycase a breakdown for either Ichigo and/or Rukia for the future?
Ichigo and Byakuya...they seem not to see the signals between each other. Their reactions to Rukia's accusation of there's something more than friendship between them is too humorous. I'm happy that you showed the aftermath on Rukia's part as well. Yes, she is definatly having as hard a time with this as Ichigo. Nay I say it, WAY HARDER...
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. Later!~