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by Crya2Evans

person Anon
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Despite all mentions of tissue boxes I didn't think I was going to cry, but when Rukia started packing I was definitely sniffling. You did a wonderful job of conveying a sense of hopelessness. For that moment I desperately wanted them to work things out and knowing it wasn't possible broke my heart.

I'm enjoying this story so much. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6

Like NOTHING, I'm completely in LOVE with this story. Especially after this last chapter. Ichigo really is breaking apart at the seams, and all I wanna do is hug him ;A; I just got up about twenty minutes ago, and and not really functional enough for a fantastic review, so I'll just let you know how much I loved this chapter and get some coffee. ♥
person Ranna
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know how everyone says "I read it for the plot," then laughs because it is the exact opposite? I truly read this for the plot. I so want to know what comes next that whenever I see this story has updated I just go straight to it.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, Renji brings up an interesting point. Are we sure she doesn't hit the kids? I mean, he was right that Ichigo isn't home all the time so how would we know. Also, I understand that you can't just kill her. It would totally ruin what you are trying to accomplish. I would like to know though why she thinks Ichigo and Byakuya are hooking up behind her back. I had thought for a while (from the beginning actually) that she was seeing someone else. Last question, promise. Will she ever confront her brother? That's all. Still loving the story and looking forward to the next chapter :)
person Yakumo
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This chapter was simply the best yet. THE DRAMA! D: I love Renji too. ^_^ -hugs her Renji plushie-
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok short review this time what with it being nearly 3am and me really needing to get some sleep. This chapter was brill (as always but I thought I'd mention it anyway) and I don't hate Renji, he's just voicing the concerns that others haven't been able to. I love Renji, he may not be eloquent but he's blunt and sometimes that's better than trying to word something well but missing the point entirely.
“It's always the good looking ones.” That waitress is so right, and it's gonna be fun when these two realise it. I bet they both know deep down but they just can't figure it out yet. That is so like men, they are kinda clueless when it comes to love.
I like drunk Ichigo, most stories don't let him let his hair down but every now and then you need time to break and drinking helps with that.
Ok, I don't know what happened to the short review but never mind, who needs sleep right. I can sleep when I'm dead XD
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Baroqueangel
person Kuromei
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think we all know that, while Renji means well, he's not the most eloqent or tactful being. I forgive him. ^w^

*sniffle* I liked that chapter though. It's nice to read good fics on my birthday. ^w^
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, man! That was AWSOME!! I almost cried!! LOVE ya story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5

I have the front page of the Bleach section bookmarked, and I haven't been back in a few days, so I randomly wandered over and was skimming through the list, looking for something to read, and then realized this had been updated and was like, 'HURRAY!' It seemed like something of a filler-chapter, but it was good for all that anyway.
I'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter as well, especially with Byakuya having spirited Ichigo away.

I always like it when people tell me specifically what they liked about my fanfics, so I'm going to try and do the same, as often as possible. In this chapter, I absolutely adored, "Kuchiki glacier". I don't know why. XD
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure you don't want to...accidentally...kill her? I'm almost in tears here. Will they ever find out that their son was the one who told Byakuya?