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by Crya2Evans

schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more more, sorry my repeat key got stuck...
I loved the ending, Syaoran is sooooooo sweet. This story is getting better with each chapter and I didn't think it could get better than chapter 1 'cos that was brill. I can't wait for the next few chapters, I'm sure they'll be even better than this one.
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow man!! It's starting to get realy into the story!! I loved the part were his dauter(?) said "don't cry" I thought it was realy good and sad at the same time!! LOVE ya story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
person Ranna
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm slightly surprised tht Matsumoto didn't gab it all over Soul Society. I guess this kind of thing is too big to do that.
person Yakumo
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOO DON'T HURT ICHIGO! -clings to him- Bad Rukia! ;O_O um..anyway, great job on this. I love how the children behave. xD
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is GERAT!! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Though I would like to know more about the kids, like the looks and ages!! please E-mail me this info at keraizaki@yahoo.com!! Please and thankyou!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're working me to tears here! Ahh, somehow I can see myself needing more tissues in future chapters. Something that flittered through my mind as this chapter was drawing to a close was the disaster this coming out is going to cause; Rukia is well liked and so on and so forth. But Ichigo isn't exactly low on loyal friends either and I feel a clash between those loyalties coming on.

I can't wait to see how it plays out! I'm already anxious for more chapters! ^^;
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"As my beta and I say, if Ichigo isn't gay then he's really, really repressed. lol"

*Giggling* Nice comment! XD

Great chapter, plenty of action...I enjoyed the phyisical conflict in Rukia...how her Spritual Presseure is under control yet she unleashes fury upon Ichigo!
and It seems that the whole of Seretei will be buzzing with this news...makes you wonder how Inoue and Renji will take this Especially Renji!

Since you chose to write how Ichigo and Rukia's relationship will be, I was wondering, would you give the same plot as if it was Renji and Rukia?
also do you find that Rukia finds it easy to abuse Ichigo because she can get away with it with him and not anyone else?

All in all, I got no complaints about this chapter....(Though, I sorta wished you chose Shuuhei for Ukitake instead....But let me squezee that thought into ball and kick it out....)
I'm anxious to see the next chapter come out!
person Yakumo
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't gotten the chance to review this story yet. ;^_^ It's really great, just like all of your work. Poor Ichigo though...he's too sweet to be hit...T__T Anyway, on a (sort of) related note I don't like Rukia all that much. >.> Anyway, good work.
person Kuromei
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* So sad for Ichigo. ;__; He loves her so much, yet... TT__TT

*grabs a tissue* I look forward to the next update.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I feel like a drug addict! I already need my next fix of this story.
I love that Matsumoto hasn't changed her gossiping ways, how else would soul society pick up all the news :)
Please please please update again soon, or I might go into withdrawl.