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for Of Violence

by Crya2Evans

person Ranna
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For such a perceptive guy, Ukitake can be a little slow sometimes. Not that I blame him, I wouldn't have thought about it either.
person Kuromei
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nyuuuu~ I want to read more! XD This is so...so...I don't know how to describe it! X3 I just know that "good" doesn't even begin to cover it. ^w^ *hugs*
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sanji? Niiice.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying how this story is coming together, the characters are perfect, never once becoming OOC. I'm interested to see how this plays out and comes together. You're doing amazing! <3 it
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I wasn't already hooked, I definately am now.
I like character driven stories, plot ones are good too but sometimes they get a little too plot heavy. Focusing on characters helps to bring you into the story with them, gives you more... does that make any sense??
I love the kids, I bet Mikan really can understand every word he says.
Ok that'll do for now, I eagerly await the next chapter.
person Ranna
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I completely understand about the Ichi/Hime thing. Even if Ichigo isn't gay (which I personally think he is) then a relationship with Hime wouldn't work out. Just their basic personalities, I guess. Hime reminds me of Rinoa, which means I don't really like her.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't get bored with this one, girl.

It's damn good.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what an awesome start to your story. I do hope you continue :)
person chibizoe
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, this looks very intersting - it's not a subject that you tend to hear much about. Looking forward to seeing where this goes :)
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
person steisi
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I must admit, your idea intrigued me to no end. I don't think I've ever seen anything quite like it. Very original, congratulations! Combined with your writing style, this story makes for a great way to spend one's time. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you take this next. Hope to read more of it soon! Kisses!