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by Crya2Evans

person Kuromei
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've heard of post-partum depression, but post-partum aggrevation? That's a new one on me. Maybe it's stress induced...

I'd love to see more of this, if only to see what the hell the deal is with Rukia. Not that I dislike her, or anything, but I worry for Ichigo. =(
person Ranna
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. Um, it's interesting. But I'm not sure if this is gonna be a good idea for me to read. I trust you though. (On a side note, Renji/Hime?)
person Baroqueangel
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is great. I can see that I'm going to get addicted to this.
Orange with green polka dots? It gave me a headache just thinking about it but it is so Orihime. I loved Renji's gift for Byakuya - second best uncle, I had to laugh at his downright cheek. But that is totally Renji.
Even though thisis set in the future, the characters seem spot on to me. They have matured and evolved as it were but still keep some of the little quirks from when they were young(er).
I loved how Ichigo caught himself when talking about Renji - 'That bas...idiot' I do that when working with the kids at school, sometimes you can't help it but you always (mostly) manage to catch yourself. It's so true to life and it just fit Ichigo perfectly.
Please update soon, like I said, I'm already addicted - feed my addiction please :)