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by Crya2Evans

person english muffin
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so crass, Ikkaku. I liked how Ichi's place of solace was Bya's office. and he even did his paper work. <3 Also: Was it strange that I got a thought about Ichi would stamp himself unconsciously with Bya's stamp, and then he'd fall asleep/Bya would somehow see it? Kinda a random ero thought there. o.O Is this what you call a plot bunny? Next chapter please. :D
person english muffin
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh, half of my post got cut off. Also: Is it strange I thought about how Ichi would stamp himself unconsciously and Bya would somehow see it and get all possessive? Some weird random ero thoughts...is this what you call a plot bunny? Next chapter, please. :D
person v
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wait on pins an needles for every new chapter of this story, I love the way you delve into each character and how they are coping with each new development in the story, its just so real and heartwrenching and somehow exciting at the same time. I love Ichigo's response to "letting go" how unbelieveably true it was, and how it wrapped up that chapter with an aching sympathy for him from the reader. :)
person Kuromei
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again with the tactless friends but, like Renji, Ikkaku isn't exactly known for his tact. X3 He's just worried about Ichigo, like everybody else, so I forgive him. I wonder if Ichigo will, though. lol XD

*fangirl squeal* Eeee~! XD I can't wait for the second half of the chapter! XD But I will, 'cuz I love the story too much for it to be rushed. ^w^ *hugs Draco-san*
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not entirely satisfied!!! What you talking about, that was great. My favourate line is 'A vision of tranquilizers and hysterics danced on the back of his mind.' I was in stitches, it just sounds so like Renji. I was cheering for Shirosaki when he confronted the unseated shinigami. I wanted him to knock them all unconscious but then I suppose he would have gotten into troble and we can't have that. I look forward to the next part of the chapter.
I'd write a longer review but I have to be up in 5 and a half hours for work so I really should get some sleep.
Brilliant as always.
person Yakumo
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd gladly stalk Kira. ~_^ I'm glad to see an update!
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm leaving my email for your update. I love this story and also Minutes To Midnight. I never thought of writing Gin and Ichigo as a couple but you do it wonderfully.

ShadowFlamePanther@tampabay.rr.com
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very beautiful...the best and most painful chapter of this fic...I feel so bad for Rukia and Ichigo...especially on Ichigo's decision to go with the divorce...on a personal aspect of my life with my own parents separated then divorced when I was young, I didn't mind, nor seen the outcome. Now I'm older, I see the results for both parties...none are good, nobody wins, leaves unscarred, affected...and the people you care most suffer. I can see the paraells of Ichigo and Rukia relationship, and that make it all more intense and real. Brilliant work!

I do want to be updated on this so my email is~
babygurl_y2j@hotmail.com

Thank You
person english muffin
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a really intense chapter. I'm almost sad Rukia and Ichigo are breaking up! Sometimes I'm rooting for ByaIchi, then for Ichiru...It's so horrible. What are you doing to this yaoi fangirl?! T^T The emotions are so deep and true...I can really believe this story and pairings. More more more
person Kuromei
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* Yet again, another great chapter. TTwTT It's sad, but a decision had to be made. *grabs a tissue*

We're close to the end, aren't we? We're one chapter closer to Ichi/Byakushi! XD lol I can already see Zaraki's smirk and hear him say, "Heh, told ya so, Hime." X3 Gawd, I love him. lmao XD *hugs for Draco*