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for Learning To Fly Trilogy

by greywitch

schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice!
person gaara89
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this. It is quite amazing. I love the ByaUlqui pairing, and and often disappointed because there just aren't enough well written stories featuring it. I never imagined ShunGrimm...but it was unbearably hot anyway. I love how he called Grimm "Kitten", that's an adorable nickname for him. Anyway, I really did enjoy reading this. I was sad when I noticed it was over. Great work on this!



~Reigh~
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi-Hi!! I realy like your story!! I think thst you should conutune(?) it!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =3
person koloruki
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really like the thought of the silent pair(Byakuya and Ulquiorra) and the adventurous pair(Shunsui and Grimmjow). Hahahahaha! Though I thought the pairing was bound to be unsuccessful, the way the story was made achieved the wanted reaction from its readers. I will be expecting more stories from you. Thank you.
person Yakumo
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I really liked Shunsui calling Grimmjow "kitten." The hollow hole thing was also very good; I liked the way you had touching the hollow hole be so erotic to the arrancar. Once again, very good work. ^_^
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Kudoes on the actual explanation as to how the two ended up at Soul Society, even if it was a pretty much PWP.

You are a wonderful writer too. Very well done.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man! I love this little trilogy! I'm so glad you put it here! I don't have a livejournal so I never commented there but here, I can actually leave a review. Ulquiorra and Byakuya is a very pretty pairing, I like how you worked that out. And I never, in a million years, would have even thought about Grimmjow/Shunsui. But I like it! I love how you slowly led Grimmjow into it and all the references to his behavior being catlike. His release form is adorable, it's so hard to take him seriously. Those ears get me all the time.

Hollow hole play is hot, too. Just thought I'd mention that. I never thought about using them like that until I read your stuff and now I'm intrigued. I really ought to start writing more Espada stuff, I suppose.

Anyways! Great fic! I look forward to more of everything from you!

~Dracoqueen22~