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for Flawless Imperfections

by WannaBePirate

schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love scary Yachiru! You don't see that often...in fact, I've only seen it once I think. -snickers- Rei just had to go push panchiko-heads buttons LOL ahhhh I love it I love it I love it. -rolls around- ahh the Rei and Kenny goodness....never gets old -nodnod-

-giggles- I've been forgetting my siggy! -gasps- still not quite used to AFF yet, its a tad quirky in comparison. Thx for tellin me about it!

-WannaBeNinja's evil minion of doom-
-Angil's partner in crime-
-Green Shade's story stalker-
-ArjetLuna's groupie fangirl-

~Sweet Yuya Shiina~
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe the notes at the top of the chapter are so damn funny haha CUTE! You are an adorable evil Master -nods- but I won't tell! Kenny was pretty adorable this chapter too -looks around to make sure he isn't listening- it was so sweet! Ahh you're so descriptive too, how could I forget. Oh wait...I didn't. After all, the last chapter you put of FI...WHEW!! -fans self- hot hot hot AHEM...onward! -clicky-

-WannaBeNinja's evil minion of doom-
-Angil's partner in crime-
-Green Shade's story stalker-
-ArjetLuna's groupie fangirl-

~Sweet Yuya Shiina~
person Ladylara
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, heh heh. I am glad he finally got her to respond to him. I was worried in the beginning.
Nice work. Cant wait for more.
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We demand MOAR!!!!

I'm still loving this story!!! On a personal note, I'd rather see updates to this than "My Insanity". While that story is a fun read, this one captures my interest more.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course it is eventful you write a great story I love reading it..Thanks
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh threesome come on it is easy and not to mention kinky...``mind wonders`` ok back to the review thanks for posting the new chapter I love it great job
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot, sweet and romantic. I think you nailed it. Good job! :)
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well so far so good would love to read more.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it!! It took me awhile before I could write lemons for my FF.net account too. XD So what I did was read a bunch of GOOD stories with GOOD lemons...and before I knew it I was a writing my own pervy lemons LOL.

And yeah its ok to not like butterflies...I dont trust then either because once one flew INTO my EAR!! God I FREAKED!!

Well I'll be watching out for your next chapter. Until then Ja ne!! =^_^=
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! I love this story! Ken-chan is so horny XD Though I bet he'd get farther with Rei-chan if he was more patient and sensitive XD though its hard to find those kinds of men these days *sigh* =^_^=

Anyway I hope you update soon! Ja ne!

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