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PERV...well ok so your not tooo bad lol. Good chappy thanks for posting can't wait to read more.. with real smut between them

This is a great story. I love the way it is written and hope to see more soon. I await paitently for the next update. Great job.

ahhh I love this story up date soon please please

I'm liking this story...


To me though, the voice in her head, her "sword" is sounding more and more like a hollow every day. New vizard perhaps?

I'm curious to see if she can control her zanpakuto or will it control her? Nice touch with the inner struggle Zaraki's suffering with.

Lovely. Two troubled people finding each other in that chaotic world. You gotta love it! I really like how you describe Zaraki and his mixed-up feelings. He's not a man to handle such emotions well. But he recognizes the effect she has on him. Wonderful!

I've chosen to review this story here rather than at FF.net for two reasons...first, I was stunned to see that you hadn't received any reviews thus far. Second, I've been lazy and haven't reviewed it yet despite enjoying all the chapters. It's a great story. Especially if you love Zaraki like I do. You have some great elements...a unique, well crafted OC, humor, sex and lots of shinigami shenanigans! I'm curious to see what happens next for these two. Keep up the wonderful work!