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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I literally screamed it at the end of the chapter... Literally...
Right now I am kinda hoping that Akina actually kills Chizu. Violently. There must be lots of blood.
I literally screamed it at the end of the chapter... Literally...
Right now I am kinda hoping that Akina actually kills Chizu. Violently. There must be lots of blood.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay chapter 20 just came out of left field! I had no idea that was going to happen and I think Kenpachi was a total ass for doing that to Akina. I mean didn't he learn from the whole dinner disaster that Chizu is a liar and spreads rumors? I mean come on! I love Zaraki, he's one of my 3 top favorites on the show but I can't help feeling a little pissed at his lack of faith. All in all this was a very nice twist that I sooooo didn't see coming and I can't wait to read your next update!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, won't he feel like a total turd if she ends up really getting hurt on this patrol. What will the little pink wonder have to say about all this as well when she gets back and avoids him like the plague :)
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh ohh another good chapter ``begs``` more more ok when you up date .
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this reminds me of......ME!!! hehehehehehe.....anyways great fic! is the end in site?
enjoying the funny and sexy captains!
enjoying the funny and sexy captains!
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. Interesting. Akina's pretty cute. Yachiru's a bit too much of a kid, but then that's how most people write her.
So when is the bitch going to loosen up? She needs a good kicking.
So when is the bitch going to loosen up? She needs a good kicking.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Nice level of explanation and complication going on and are you hinting (blatantly) at Retsu and Yamamoto? Now that's an interesting twist. It could work.
I feel sorry for Soi, don't ask me why.
And next?
I feel sorry for Soi, don't ask me why.
And next?
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the shit as hit the fan!! way cool chapter!
keep going with this!
love it!
~_^
keep going with this!
love it!
~_^
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like the meeting and the manipulation and the date. Feel the sexual tension. Zaraki seems to be getting a lot of action recently on this site. Weird.
But Yachiru and Toshiro? It's hard to match Yachiru with anyone and I wouldn't be game to try. I suppose he was the best choice as everyone had to have a date. As least you didn't match her with Ukitake or wait a minute.... Yamamoto? Are you feeling nauseous yet? Hisagi and Soi...... And who is matched up with Kira? Questions, questions.
Poor Ikkaku. He never seems to get lucky.
But Yachiru and Toshiro? It's hard to match Yachiru with anyone and I wouldn't be game to try. I suppose he was the best choice as everyone had to have a date. As least you didn't match her with Ukitake or wait a minute.... Yamamoto? Are you feeling nauseous yet? Hisagi and Soi...... And who is matched up with Kira? Questions, questions.
Poor Ikkaku. He never seems to get lucky.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute, cute. Yes, very cute. Thank goodness,some one who portrays Yachiru as something other than a very young child. She might like sweets, but that doesn't make her completely child like.
Like the OC too.
Like the OC too.