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Wow, absolutely loved that.

Hmmmm well! I'm at a loss at what to say about this one. Dark, angsty, troubling on so many different levels, unsettling, but unbearably hot!

Can't wait for more! I think !

Holy hell that was spectacular/awesome/*insert other suitable word of awe here*! X3 Sex aside - which was also super hot, by the way - the writing was great. XD I especially loved how you wrote them both and their interaction with each other. XD
You should so write more. X33

Ah, this story is wonderfully angsty and sensuous at the same time! I really enjoy your works, especially the great needy hate sex and all the complex emotions. I hope you continue writing this story.

Very good story, and well written. I also really like the 'dead' personality you've given Ichigo; there is something (in lack of better word) delicious about it. ^^'
I hope you will continue think fic, and thanks for your work until now^^

So bloody hot!!!

Hi love. I was ecstatic to see you'd decided to continue this, even if it is for just a few more chapters. This particular one almost made me cry. I loved it, don't get me wrong. I just found myself too caught up in it all, I guess. You're doing a wonderful job at making it all seem realistic in the sense that the characters act much in the way I think real people would given the more than stressful conditions of their lives. And that draws the reader in, makes him feel involved with what's happening. With the characters' thoughts and feelings. I'll be definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter, hopefully from Grimmjow's point of view. I'm very much interested in what his thoughts on Ichigo's behaviour would be. Kisses!
P.S.
I recommend you listen to 'Milk' by Garbage. It may be just me, but I think it fits the Ichigo from this chapter perfectly.

That was amazing, and probablly as in-character as I've ever seen Grim in a fan-fic. Nice.

Just thought I would stick this in here! Grammar corrections aren't annoying, don't worry. :) The tense switch was originally a mistake in the first part with Ichigo's POV. I went back to fix it, and decided I actually liked it that way, so I kept it up and mirrored it in Grimmjow's POV as well.

Past tense was allowing them both to be introspective and deliver their thoughts, while present tense forces a revelation of what they actually feel and want without being able to censor it. That's what I thought, anyway. >.>;

This was just so beautiful and amazing, blew me the hell away.
but this ---> "…Damn I’m good." made my day lol i can die so happy now lol Damn straight he's good.