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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another brilliant take on Grimmjow/Ichigo, love! You did beautifully, as usual. I loved the fact that you gave us the events in both their points of view. It's unbelievable, how alike they can think at times. They both wanted to feel something different, and they found it in each other. Ichigo wanted to feel alive, because he was dead inside. Grimmjow wanted to numb the pain of feeling too alive by conquering and taking death as he saw it; an-orange haired shinigami. I really love the psychological aspects you, even if it's subconsciously, explore in your stories. There's always a certain dependancy in your characters' personalities. They compliment each other, offer what the other needs. All in all, I loved this fic. I just want to let you know I spotted a few grammar errors; mostly in the tense. You seem to switch from past to present in the same sentence ithout any real reason. I hope I'm not coming off as annoying or anythong, I just thought you'd like to know. Otherwize, I aplaud you latest work and encourage you wholeheartedly to keep providing us loyal readers with your admittedly addictive writing! Kisses!
P.S.
Ichigo sucking on Grimmjow's fingers was hot as hell, by the way. Loved that touch!
P.S.
Ichigo sucking on Grimmjow's fingers was hot as hell, by the way. Loved that touch!
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arghh nosebleed! *dies from bloodloss*
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this, I am bookmarking it so I can read it again cuz its just so fucking sexy.