rate_review Reviews

A pissy Renji would be a great way to get Ichigo safe and away from the bad guys and then they have hot steamy man-sex when Ichigo has recovered from his mental scars.

Kay I didn't finish reading, I got to like the first five and stopped. You don't really show the reader anything. You just tell us what happens and it sounds very "and this happens" "and that happens." Also, someone who has been raped generally isn't that incline on getting into a serious relationship mere hours aftet the rape. He acts as if he hasn't even been raped. It's very unrealistic.

Also, from what I tell, you characterzation of the characters is very off. Ichigo is a bit too weak, Renji is too kind. Ichigo and Renji have a confrontational relationship, and so it is very like....weird that they are all of a sudden dating with no real reason behind it.

If Ichigo was repressing the memory of the rape then he would probably still be in emotional shock. But having him have flash backs to the rape are a lot more realistic. I really wish you would describe the oc's so the readers get a better idea of them.

I don't think it's repression. I think he's lost his freakin mind. And why isn't he screaming to high heaven to see Renji? I'm beginning to think there is more going on but I'll have to wait until you write it out I guess.

You can't leave it there!!! What happened to Renji??? More please

OK, now the next few should explain who these people are, right? I am so disgusted with the lack communication between these people. And where the heck is everyone else? Don't tell me they only sent four people (or I was reading too fast, again, and skipped over a paragraph while scrolling down the page).

So intense! I am glad that you made it a little more realistic about Ichigo being sensitive about his rape. I was wondering if you could gie a better description of the rapist and the other two bad guys because I am having a hard time imagining them.

Wow, you are fast! So for now they won't be doing "the deed". I can see some of Ichi's concern now. Another question: Any other pairings, like Kira/Shuuhei? And is you intention to have Kira be jealous of Ichigo cause he really did want Renji or is he just yanking his chain and joking with him?

So let me get this straight (cause I'm pissed now): They know who raped Ichigo, but their not going to tell him anything cause it's too personal? WTF! He was just RAPED by someone most of you know. God! I hope they tell him something cause I'm pissed off for him.

*remembers that this is just a story and the characters depicted are not real*

I love this story. Though I must say Ichigo is a little out of character but he fits well in the plot. Also do you have this pre-typed or something because your seriously serving them at an exceedingly fast rate (which is a very good thing and I send you cookies and milk(I have soy, rice, whole and 1%)).

Ganbatte!!!
Ryn