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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Perhaps you could go and write more stories. The one you wrote is awesome!
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Although this story was already done a long time ago, I still would like to review this amazing story. Boredom and such compelled me to read this to the end and every bit was just well written (for my tastes anyway). I think that you kept everyone in character and your descriptions of everything weren't so very long/poetic which I'm thankful for. I really enjoyed reading your one and only story you have here on AFF, you're probably never going to read this review though :(
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I cried a bit at the end. I love how you ended it and yet I feel really bad about Byakuya and Renji. Definitely put up an epilogue. I'd love to know how it ends up for the two of them and if she gets her second chance.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo I dont like this ending, its so sad. what happens now? to all three of them, I mean ..will she die of old age and end up in spirit world? or....whut happens? you made me curious! please tell me your not planning to end it like this!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!! you updated!!!! A bit abrupt, and I'm sorry to see it end...still, I enjoyed it very much ^_^ You're a wonderful writer, and I hope you will consider posting more stories on here...especially Bleach!!! (I noticed you paired Unohana with Uryu....sounds interesting!! care to elaborate? Also I wouldn't mind a Renji and Orihime pairing ^_^ But I'll probably enjoy anything you choose to post!!) Thank You!!!!!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I was not expecting an ending like that. lol
I'd love to know the alternate endings or the epilogue. I am pretty curious about what happens next too. lol With all of them.
I'd love to know the alternate endings or the epilogue. I am pretty curious about what happens next too. lol With all of them.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good writer knows when to write an ending suitable for a real adult relationship (and I mean adult in the true sense not the XXX kind that every seems to assume nowadays) I liked it and more importantly, I would like to see more of your work. :) If one person posts a juvenile message whining about how you should have done x, y and z do take my advice and ignore it. I'm sure the majority here will appreciate the ending in some way or another. It was the most suitable outcome even if it was not what everyone hoped for.
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! cliffhangers are EVIL lol
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
Your an awesome writer! can't wait to read more. ^-^
Your an awesome writer! can't wait to read more. ^-^