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a-hmmm. why did Renji leave in the night? did he leave her a message? I'm getting a sense that Reiko is fond of Renji but somewhat starved of affection so that may have swung things in his favour. Complications is right. and his reactions to when Byakuya gave him orders........Bwahahahahaha Interesting

Awwww poor Renji! But hey who knows it could still turn out good for him. I mean its the Marriage Law challenge and that means that all availible male taicho's and fuku-taicho's must get married.

So Renji still has a chance right!? RIGHT?! Bad Byakuya! What you're doing is wrong! How can you take Renji away from Reiko?! Even if it is to suit your baka prideful needs!

Byakuya: TT.TT meanie
Me: You are being a meanie! But I'm done chewing you out for now.

Anyway I loved it! Can't wait for your next update.

*grabs a paper fan and starts wacking Byakuya over the head*
"Bad Byakuya!"

Ja =^_^=

that was really good chapter. Not only was the smut good(like really good), but it fely really romantic. Usually i woud want someone like Byakuya to have reiko but you made me like renji and reiko together so much that i want them together. though i would like some smut between Byakuya and reiko without renji finding out. I don't want renji's broken heart and i think you should comply because i never cared about renji until YOU made me love him!!

It's not lewd, so don't worry. It's awesome! ^_^

Yay, another update! This chapter was great! I hope your thumb doesn't go numb from all your sitting on it, though; you'll need that to type more chapters for us~! ;D

Yay!! Go Renji x Reiko!! Renji needs some lovin too! XD. Can't wait for the next update =^_^= Ja!!

Byakuya, you need to deal with those old farts as soon as you can!!! What makes them so sure that Unohana or Soi Fong will give in to their demands. Fufufufufufufu.
Another great chapter!! Renji, serene!!!! Damn, she's good. Your characterisation is consistent and I thought that this was a great chapter. "action" is hard to portray is prose and is not necessarily the most interesting part of the story. i like these little introspective pieces that we get from your characters. Keep going, we're here cheering you on XD

i like this story, especially the main character. She has two sides to her personality one side is dainty, while the other is the opposite, even though we haven't seen it yet, we know its there since she always talks about it.

Both at the same time? Hmmmmmmmmm, kinda hot but I just can't picture it for Reiko. Maybe in her wild heydays but not where her character is now. I think it's really cute how she was so concious of her appearance when she was woken up, not wanting to be seen in her yukata because it wasn't proper. Congratulations for being consistent with ehr characterisation. ^_^ I must admit that I find her endearing and Renji (sob) poor boy (oh, the anguish)
Although I am still hankering for Byakuya/Reiko but hey, your choice!! Whatever you do with her (or rather whoever ends up doing her) is in your hands afterall. :) Just promise to persevere with this story as I am really enjoying it.

oooh...I love your writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!