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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just gotta say this story is amazing. The writing is very well done and the events flow nicely! I hope you update soon.
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you completely mystified me with the last two chapters, my head feels like it might explode from the interest! I love the way this is written, how we delve into Orihime's head in such a troubling, strange place and situation. Ulquiorra and Aizen are described wonderfully (though I admit Grimmjow doesn't seem himself at times) and the plot isn't rushed at all! I hope you will update this story soon, and that some points are made clear for the curious.
Good luck!
BlackButterfly.
Good luck!
BlackButterfly.
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really really good! Can't wait for more!
ch9
ch9
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! Update! So glad you haven't forgotten about this story. I really enjoyed this chap :D. Good luck with the writing!
Kay`
Kay`
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always know, when I walk away from a story, but yet can't get it off my mind, this means I am totally captured by it, and this one did just that!! This story is great, and I can't wait to read more!!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. You've done a good job describing Orihime's lonliness and isolation. It looks like you can pair her with several characters. I look forward to the next chapter and who she ends up with.
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting story. I've just read through chapter eight. Very nicely written. You've honed in on certain aspects of these characters' natures and created an intriguing scenario. The tension is great. I'm loving the oblique hints at what goes on behind Ulquiorra's facade. Looking forward to more updates.
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh btw, did you know about Ulquiorra's theme song? http://lookingback7.deviantart.com/art/Moonshield-ulquiorra-118492062 (here are lyrics and a link to a live performance.
Kubo Tite chose this song for Ulquiorra's theme, it reminds me of your chapter 8, with it's references to red and cold and fire, especially this stanza:
And how I lust for the dance and the fire
deep of the nectarine sunset to drink
spill me the wind and its fire
to steal of the colors - I'm the moonshield
Kubo Tite chose this song for Ulquiorra's theme, it reminds me of your chapter 8, with it's references to red and cold and fire, especially this stanza:
And how I lust for the dance and the fire
deep of the nectarine sunset to drink
spill me the wind and its fire
to steal of the colors - I'm the moonshield
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so wonderful. I am thoroughly enjoying this. The characterisation of Ulquiorra (sp?) is perfect. Best I've read so far. I also like the characterization of Inoue, everything seems intact, even her idle thoughts and questions lol. I also like the pace of this story because it fits with the pairing. People seem to think a romance happens in three chapters. :D The progression is good and I really like the dialogue :D. Update soon!!!
Kay~
Kay~
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to have to second the confusion re: chapter 8. Did the rest of the chapter get accidentally cut off perhaps?