AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I admit that I feel slightly robbed of the lemon, but if I ignore that, this was so sweet! >_< I know it isnt much of a review but at least its something, right? Good luck and keep up the great job!
person keebz
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwe tis cute :) well done.
person cahepyp
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is funny stuff. Great job.
person K.Blood
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
From the title and summary I was expecting nothing but drunken smut from this story, but you surprised me. This is really good. The writting is great and so are the characters' personalities. You got them just right. I love how you describe the sex scene, not with long drawn out graphic imagery, but with a few short lines that are beautifully poetic. Very well done.