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for Wilted Flower

by Anestshia

person vbruce
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting and unusual. And yes, abuse of that nature probably would result in someone being highly touch shy. Good job. I'm enjoying this very much so far.
person Emyrei
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a strange fic. A strange pairing...I like it.
Good second chapter.
When you did the: "No, this was for a special type of slave…
*pause for dramatic effext*
Sex slaves." I heard a dramatic Dun dun DUUUNNNN music in the background. It was very amusing.
person mimi22
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't give up on it, the story is really interesting and it's quite a shame this pairing hasn't been explored enough. The premise is credible and I like what's been going on so far. :P
Update soon! *hugs*
person Yakumo
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I like the back story you gave Hana-kun. I hope you update again soon. <3
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hanatarou is one of my favorite characters out of Bleach, and much overlooked by fic writers. Very intriguing pairing and would love to see more of this fic. Well written, but could you describe Hanatarou's appearance occasionally? I didn't see much of that in the first chapter.
person Yakumo
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. I've never seen a Byakuya/Hanatarou fic before but I think they would be cute together. I strongly urge you to continue this. ^_^
person Afrieal
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you've got a great story going... i've liked this pairing since i found them on Fanfiction . net a while ago...(tossing Af the box of kleenex) Af say's it's gonna be a two box story with this as the begining. keep up the great work

Rysha and Affie
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually like this pairing, I read them together in one of the stories on here and it intrigued me. I think they go well together and it would be nice if you continued with the fic.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. A pair I've never seen before but with alot of potential. Keep going!!