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by Irana

person Redbird
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I commend you for writing it, it makes the world of ff that much hotter. x)
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck. Yeah. Now that's a three way!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i feel really dirty.
i still read all of it though.
person katami
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, I love you! That was so wickly wonderful! I just love this story, it is so deliciously sinful. I'm going to be grinning for the rest of the day with thoughts of that threesome running through my head. Thank you!
person katami
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord! So hot, so wrong and so perfect. I totally love you because that was absolutely brilliant. Promise me you will write more.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel so dirty reading this. However, that will not stop me from wanted to read the next chapter. A threesome sounds hot!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(O_O)!! that is so fucking HAWT! oh my lord, isshin-daddy can have my ass, anyday, anytime, anywhere! *fans self*
very nice job my dear. i hope you gave the creator of that pic (drools) the link to this ficlet. maybe you can inspire her to draw some more which would in turn inspire you! lol! thanks for sharing! this totally made my morning. (^_^)

~a wide awake Devious
person katami
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure whether to clap like the fangirl I am or run and bleach my brain. Very hot and a little scary, dear. This is turning into a real guilty pleasure.
person Chiyo
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Isshin x Ichigo... my guilty pleasure. This is so dirty, and so wrong... why do I love it so much?! Seriously, Nice job on it! It's so... dirtyhot! Well written, too, and I hope to see more of it *_*

I love that art also!
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find myself disturbed that I'm loving the hotness of these lessons.