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for Neglect

by Smoore

person Zevlyn
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...seems they're sleeping on that make-shift bed in the closet, hm? Very nice, and very steamy. I liked it a lot!

--Zev
person Ellie
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XDDD
omfg.

<3
person Queeny
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats hot and cute yey!
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha... I loved it. Maybe you should make a sequel or some sort of follow-up story.
person foxsiren
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot sexy and funny!!! XD!!! u should make another one...
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"She couldn’t believe she was watching one of her best friends being intimate with another man.

So she opened the closet door a little wider and watched on."

Best lines ever written!!XD