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for 1Sentence: UraIchi

by Smoore

schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yo, can I do 11?
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, it's curtiszidaneziraa@hotmail.com
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this like... a one-line-per-person thing? Cause as I was reading through it I was inspired to a fabulous multichapter fic with one prompt per chapter. If that's against your rules, I shall choose only one, but if I may have your permission, I'd like to use 11, 3, 35, 41, 22, 49, 19, 13, 28, 18, 38, 9, 21, and 32, in that order.
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi (I was going to email you, but couldn't get your adress, so I decided to review again, sorry for being so annoying). I've decided to do #5 - run. I've credited you and everything. Thanks for the challenge, hope you don't mind me accepting :P
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this was nice, not sure if it's suppose to be a story as well as a challenge, or just a challenge, but it works very well as a story. One thing I don't get - –When he felt Ichigo’s fingers tentatively lock together around the back of his neck, playing with the short blonde hairs there as they kissed, he knew that he wouldn’t only ever want Ichigo. Should that be 'would only ever want Ichigo' or am I getting this completely wrong?

I may take up one your challenges, they all seem like such good ideas!
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I accept #4 - Box

"4. Box –Ichigo might be in love with Kisuke, but that didn’t mean the older man could use him as a box-mover and not pay him."

Very inspiring. It will be a one-shot, and should be finished soon.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah - I'll send you an e-mail with the offical request ^_^
person sandcest_slave
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, i would love to write some little drabble/a story for the sentences:
1, 5,6,10,15, 18,19,31,34,43, 49 & 50. please!!
person sandcest_slave
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you can contact me through Inu_Yokai@hotmail.com if it's okay. just call me sandcest and i'll know it's from AFF.
person katami
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I think 24 is my favorite. These are really sweet and really well done, and I love how you show glimpses of other people outside the relationship.