rate_review Reviews

Omg i laugh out loud reading this fic, I love it!

Oh...mah...gawed.

That was just so fucking HOT! I LOVED EVERY FUCKING MOMENT OF IT! X3

Not to mention how much I was laughing my ass off while reading. XD

Great work, like always.
~Anan

That was great. Well written and erotic as hell. I enjoyed the play between the characters a lot.

Nice touch at the end there. I have but one aspect of constructive criticism to offer you, because otherwise just like you said, the proofreading was incredibly well done. In all the translations I've read, the faux body that Soul Reapers use are called 'gigai' not 'gagai' as you have it. Just thought I'd let you know. Other than that one thing everything about this story was great. The comedy was awesome, as was the characterization for the most part. I admit I enjoyed the thought of Ichigo blushing every time Rukia was mentioned, even if she's not the woman I usually write him with.

Thanks for sharing this!

to funny.