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HOLY FUCK A DUCK CHP.33 HAWT!!! :3

You should check out the got doujinshi bleach_doujinshi group of livejournal....my username on livejournal is beatme_breakme and I (squeals uncontrollably then takes a calming breath) love that you did a huge group of KenpachixIchigo oneshots like this...I mean, you probably already know about the group but that beautiful doujinshi Broken Box?...I heard about it from your author page on here like...months ago...and I got it translated and posted it on that group... so ya know...(shifty eyes) I'm going to read your oneshots for like the fifth time and drool and cry over them and you can go read Broken Box in English and be happy about that and we'll all be happy with the KenpachixIchigonessness!XD

I never really had much love for Zaraki/Ichigo until I started reading your work. Good on you! ♥ I dunno, I feel like this collection should be kept separate from Crush, though that's just me. I'm bookmarking the link to this in the meantime. Kisses! ♥

You have a good writing style and I love the pairing. Honestly the only thing I can see that needs a little bit of work is that you need a little more knowledge on condoms (flavored condoms like all condoms do deteriorate when exposed to moisture long term, however no condom degrades from being within the body for less than an hour, and flavored condoms are meant for oral sex, so they really wouldn't degrade in the normal amount of moisture in the body. And no condom doesn't work with water based lubricant, though many don't work with silicon or oil based ones.) just so that it could be a little more believable. Also you seem to have a thing for ass hymens and the uke being in pain, it's kinda creepy honestly since I've had bad anal sex before, and once it bleeds down there or feels like it's tearing you apart, no amount of attention to the prostate makes it feel better.

Outside of that, this is a wonderful collection. *goes off to read more stories by the author*

The two new chapters were very very sexy!! Just dont get rid of your stories there so sextastical and fantastical I might cry if they went away ;D

Oh man talk about a scare in the morning!! I thought for a second you were taking it down but you're just merging it together. Understandable actually and reasonable :) But before you take the sagas down and merge don't forget to keep your wonderful reviews! That way, you can go back and reread them and feel the love we send you for your wonderful chapters ^^
I liked hte last chapter though I was thinking" 'Opps'? Dare I read on?" I also like your explanation of how Ichigo got pregnant. And Yachiru's happy reply and Ikkaku's reaction jsut made me giggle and grin like a fool. I don't think I'll ever get tired of your ideas you managed to put out.

I read that book! The second one, Valley of the Horses (I think) was also a good read.

Good work! I think you should keep all the collections separate though, because it would be confusing to have one story with so many chapters. I like that I can go to the specific ShiroIchi, KenIchi, or Ichi-uke story and know what to expect. You'll do what you want, but I still think it'd be better to keep them separate.


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Um... I kinda like having three diffrent collections. You do a lot of KenIchi ShiroIchi... so those having thier own collections make sense. And its nice having a collection of OthersIchi, though you did stick a ShiroIchi in there recently.
If thats your decision and your going to keep all the stories (even if you do revamp them) thats okay, but I do like having seperate series- lets us know what we're getting into when we see you updated!

I don't mind at all that you decided to condense your three collections into one big collection as long as don't lose any of the older stories even if they are re-written because I bet they are going to be better than ever.

Anyway I loved this chapter, poor Ichigo he is always finding out little important details at the last minute.