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September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story kinda wish there was a sequel. Your a good writer
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
loved it hope to see more. you can totally make it into a Hitsuguya(seme) X Ichigo(Uke) story.
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July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well other than the OOCness of Toshiro being so PDA this was very amusing and a fun one shot :) so keep up yer writing and enjoy your fun
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm very cute, I enjoyed reading it ^.^ I've nothing constructive to add, your writing had a nice tone to it.
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If you say you're not a really confident writer then I'm sorry to tell you that you completely lack the ability to judge that by yourself because that story just now was the best I've read all day. And let me tell you I'm bored enough to read A LOT. Keep it up it was really good!! :3
xoxo HinaKicksAss
xoxo HinaKicksAss
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute....priceless really if you think about poor Rangiku with her mouth hanging open....LOL
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! It made me laugh. If you wouldn't mind, I'd kind of like to make a bigger story around this piece. It's an adorable pairing and it would be fun to try and write it. I'll credit you too.
Let me know what you think!
--Zev
Let me know what you think!
--Zev
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it you must do more ^_^ the more you writ the mor i say ohh ya and shadow love you as well ( shut up woman i do not ......god shes anoying but i do agree with my creator do make mor its very good and got her to sqyel like a fan girl ) ( ill never undersatnd humen females no ill just never understand females ) seeeeee shadow prased you is a good sign ^_^
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XDDDD omg. Loved this! lol
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure you can hear two yaoi fangirls screeching with laughter (after the inital squeel at the kiss of course) at the final line wherever you are *grin* we live near the water so the echos should carry quite a bit. thank you. we needed a pick me up I accidentally clicked on a sad story earlier and we were still mopey (we ran out of chocolate so and that's the only way we can handle the sad ones) you cheered us right up.
Affie and Rysh
Affie and Rysh