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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is cute, and made me laugh. The ending is truly priceless, and is a good way to relax before heading off to work. Very likely I will be remembering this story all evening while I work. *snickers*
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you wrote it. It's a nice little snippet. Just maybe in the future you should re-read it for edits and stuff or get a beta to do it for you. The scene was funny and cute but I feel you might have been able to draw it out a little longer. Continue writing! ^_6
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this, go Hitsugaya!