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for The Pact

by vbruce

person Anon
schedule November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in seeing where this will go!!!! Please finish it up! This was very entertaining!!
person Tazzy
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*&cackles* Go Morrigan!!!! Give her ideas!

*snerks* And yeah, Nyx, you should tie him up, pour something delicious on him and lick him clean. Several times. Just to make sure.

*claps* lovely! When do we get the next chapter?
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I call sloppy seconds on both AND dibs on the leftover honey, if any remains. Ahh.... I LIKE her ideas. And I SECOND them.
person Tazzy
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Getting Interesting? That's one way of putting it.

*grins* and thank you for the update!
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know it's unspeakably rude, but I was trying to hold off reviewing until I reached the current chapter (that would be 14). Otherwise I'd be gushing up a storm and though I'm sure you wouldn't really mind that, I'm enjoying this story faaaaarrrr too much to stop and comment after every heady chapter (though I promise I'll go back and do so later, probably tomorrow). Anyhow, I couldn't hold back...
I was loving the whole Amazon slant you were going on, but then you added the Sidhe and I have to say that I bow down to your greatness. Keeping to one mythos (while simultaneously keeping the Bleach characters IC as much as possible) is difficult; throwing in another mythos on top of that--and doing so in a very natural manner at that--is genius.
In particular I was bouncing up and down in my chair and squealing with delight at the very end of this chapter; Ukitake and Morrighan? My word, I love you to death for that! lol. Okay, must go read more now.
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* Aww, poor Renji--he's a bit thick, isn't he? And I was trying to picture him as Consort to the Empress-To-Be of the Amazon and just about died in a fit of giggles, though on thinking it through more carefully I could totally see that working. (And even though I must admit I'm mad about slahy-goodness, your writing certainly makes reading het worthwhile again *grins*) It would be nice if Renji was appreciated for himself instead of feeling (or being made to feel) like a dog, though he's male and we all know how the AMazons feel about men other than as sperm donors. Oh, and having Ukitake stick around is beautiful too, since I simply adore him (and I'm sure even if Byukuya wasn't going to let Renji stick around Ukitake would do some pretty smooth convincing). I can't wait to read the rest of this, and will patiently await an update.
person katami
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The kids are going to get read the riot act! So cute! Cyan is just darling! And Uryuu is going to make such a good daddy someday.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Uryuu and Nyx? Maybe I haven't been paying attn, but I didn't see that one coming. Fits though, seeing as he looks like he could be Cyan's father. Funny... lotta guys popping up that look like children that supposedly aren't theirs.... It's an epidemic. I can't wait to see what the war goddess is going to do, but that's only because I'm not the one about to be horribly embarassed. More, please.
person Tazzy
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Trust a child to point things out to the adults.

And Morrigan's a bit pissed isn't she?
person Tazzy
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Oh, I bet they've.... met.... before. In the bedroom, in the field, behind a tree....

More please?