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Damnit! >.< I'd like to MEET Jyuushiro too! And Damn it Ichigo, pick your damn jaw up before it falls the fuck off! See, if I walked around like that, men would be vomitting. I wonder if Ama will listen to Morrigan's advice or if she'll just barrel along as she has so far. And if she backs off with Renji pursue cause boys are stupid and they only come sniffin around when you've moved on or will it be because Morrigan said something and he'll be curious?! dum dum dummmmmmm... Next week on The Pact!

Nyx and Jyuushiro are cute together. And are you sure Amaterasu can't keep Renji? A couple of centuries of pampering would good for him. Lovely as always, dearest.

I just wanted to throw in a sidenote of Happy birthday. ^^

Sweeeeet. Mommy's an amazon and granny's a mythical figure. fucking lucky pedigreeeeeee. I'm jealous. Hell child? I remember being called that a few times back in the day.... lovely chapter! I want to hear the mythology lesson!

I've actually been reading this story for a while now. I very much like it, though the Renji/Rukia shipper in me keeps wanting to punch Amaterasu in the face.

Seeing Ryuken trying to stoically deal with hordes of sexually repressed warrior women always drives me into gales of laughter, especially given the general fangirl opinion of him I've gleaned.

Criticism time: Sometimes, awkward sentence structure obscures the point you're trying to make. Sometimes, simpler can be better.

Almost everyone is in character, but I'm fairly certain Jushiro never had an unkind thought about anyone in his entire life. I may be a bit biased here, but hey, I love that guy. Also, I doubt that the *lieutenant* who has inspired an entire *division* in the Execution Arc is *totally* devoid of respect from other Soul Reapers.

Which brings me to another point. I understand a Renji/Amaterasu pairing is coming. I have accepted it without condoning it. I am ready for the swing of the executioner's axe. All hands have braced for impact. Thise hath note offendede thee kinge. However, while I am very biased, I think it could be set up better. It shouldn't necessitate character changes, though I acknowledge that Renji's is completely intact.

The plot kind of jumps around lately. One minute, palace intrigue, the next, strange goddesses dancing in the forest. It's enjoyable, but oddly jolting. Since we're reading it chapter by chapter in serial format, the full impact is lessened, but when read wholesale...

Now, I'm not trying to pick a fight. This is a *review* after all. I like your work so far, and I await seeing how it turns out.

Mythology. Well, the Morrigan were a triune of crazy Celtic war goddesses, so... Hmm...

Anyway, nice, atypical Bleach adventure story, and I wish you excellent luck in your coming project.

*snickers* Cyann wasn't alone... she had Uryuu with her.... *cackles*

Gotta love little kid logic...

You didn't tell me you were going to post! Wonderful as always, dear. Renji is so cute when confused. And Cyan is just darling - the poor guards. Looking forward to more.

*howls with laughter8 Cyan's got him wrapped around her finger doesn't she?

*grins* And nice to see Ama isn't as flaky as she first appeared.

Hmmm... and what would my tree be? Some sort of blonde wood, no doubt. Prickly? Well, indeed, he is rather prickly. She's a strange lil duck in't she? I'm gonna steal her and squeeze her to death. Ok, maybe not to death. Just a lot. A WHOLE lot. I really love the play of personalities between Cyan and Uryuu. Watching him try to be adult and reasonable with a small child is.... entertaining. And she's just fucking adorable. Love it. More please! :D

Soul Society is never going to get Renji back. So cute!
And Uryuu needs to learn to stop following people, it gets him in nothing but trouble. Loved it and can't wait to read more, hon.