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for Virgin's Dream

by nosnhoj909

person Pardessa
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure its been said. Story was pretty good, but its a wall of text. Separate into paragraphs and all will be well ^_^.
person moodymel
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. I loved the part where he forgot his pants! Hilarious I can just see him walking around with no pants and getting strange looks without him even realizing what's wrong.
person Queeny
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel mildly jealous and feel many comedic moments in Grimmjows near future
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once you edit this, it will be a great edition to the site. I loved reading it and found myself chuckling at the end when he forgot his pants. Wonderfully written and if you want me to edit it for you, shoot me off an email at Wolfiekrum@gmail.com.